Hello everyone! It's been a really long time since I've written or posted anything in this book. This was my first book ever so naturally, I think it's trash (;

I want to go back in and edit it to make it flow better and I wanted y'alls input.

Whether you already read the book or if it's your first time reading it, I want to know what you think.

Should I keep the original up and post the edited version separately, or would you guys prefer I edit here? 

Let me know (:

~ mistressdemalchance