Book:

Sperm: On Demand by @ihskasii_u

ANALYSIS

Plot: A young wildlife photographer captures the interest of a professor who is a novelist and a single mother. An intriguing detail is that the young man was a sperm donor in the past. But, what if both characters have undisclosed secrets? What implications arise if the child shares the same blood as Taehyung? (taken directly from the description page)

Characters: The first chapter of the story gives us an introduction to the main and supporting characters of the story. Our two main leads are Taehyung and Erin Müller. The two other BTS members in the book are Jimin and Jungkook.

Writing Style: Firstly, this style of writing is very good, excellent. The words of the story paint a picture in the reader's head about the environment and actions taking place.

Because it is written in third omniscient POV, there is a good perspective of the actions and emotions of the other characters even though the main focus is on the male lead (Taehyung).

At the end of every chapter is a bombshell that will leave you anticipating the next chapter.

Spelling and Vocabulary: For the spelling and vocabulary, I would give it a 4/10. I suggest taking time to review the story and make corrections to some sentences. There are not a lot of spelling errors but a lot of sentence errors.

EVALUATION

Overall Impression: It has a very soft and romantic beginning, given the fact that the relationship between the two leads began as love at first sight. The development of the story is gradual and inviting. The writing style is very good, however, the vocabulary is lacking.

Strengths and Weaknesses: You have a good story here and a somewhat unique plot. However, work on your sentence structure.

Recommendation: I would recommend having Grammarly go through your story to correct the grammar and sentence errors.

Don't make the book longer than it should. The beauty of a story is not in the length but in the plot material. If possible, condense two chapters into one.

Target Audience: BTS fans (ARMY), young adults, 18-30

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel