Stay In My Embrace, Please
By Velexry

Title- 3/5

The title is used to often in Wattpad books, there has been many books in my library too which has similar names like this one.

Cover - ⅘

The cover is actually nice but you should change the colour font to something dark, maintain the contrast of the title, the title isn't popping out clearly, I think you should change the font and then it will be the best.

Blurb-5/5

The blurb is honesty nice, it explains everything nicely, it doesn't opened up everything and that is something good to do, there is a cliffhanger at the end which gives the reader a sense of thrill which makes them read more.

Setting -10/10

The setting is described very nicely, like the scene where the protagonist is at a forest, the setting is described very perfectly.

Character description - 5/5

Character's description is nice, the character's are described throughout the story, the reader get to know everything about the characters, the writer reveals things about characters in every going chapters.

Hook - 10/10

The hook is overwhelming, the writer has not revealed much and the cliffhanger is making so much effect that once opening the book it is hard to detach.

Personal enjoyment - 10/10

I truthfully like LGBTQ stories so there's no chance I was going to hate it and the story is a nice one so my personal enjoyment is a ten.

Plot - 10/10

The story hasn't ended yet so I can't make a comment but as far as I have went, the plot is going smoothly, the protagonist has been living a life like hell, and the other character helps him when he was about to die.

Reality of the book - 8/10

There are many stories like that, like a character living worst life, and other character helps them. But the way writer outs it is good enough to make a reader read it.

Grammatical Mistakes -

There are not many mistakes, there are some mistakes that keep repeating which are; writing like walks, sleeps, jumps or breaths when it should just walk, sleep, jump or breathe respectively. There are some tense mistake but not many, just one or two.

There is two sentence mistake, but not big ones that would make a huge difference.

Reviewed by iamjenlisasuperior