Book Information
Title: Heart In Chaos: Into the Abyss
Author: katrina12234
Genre: Arranged marriage, Fan Fiction (BTS)
Chapters: 60
Target Audience: 15-35

A. N. A. L. Y. S. I. S

Characters:

Hana is portrayed as an open-minded, expressive, and free person who finds herself in an unusual relationship with a man she knows nothing about. She quickly accepts the situation she finds herself in rather than drag it out in the story.

Namjoon is shown as a quiet, cold, distant man who prioritizes his business and finds himself following the wishes of his parents to marry Hana.

The minor characters surrounding the story are the main characters' family members,

Writing Style:

The story is written in the third person point of view focusing on Hana at the start, before shifting to namjoon in subsequent chapters. This way of writing allows the reader to see an omnipresent view of the scenes. Sometimes we get a glimpse of other characters' thoughts and feelings.

Spellings and Vocabulary: 9/10

There were little to no spelling errors. Paragraphing and sentence phrasing were good. Punctuations were rightly used.

E. V. A. L. U. A. T. I. O. N

Overall Impression:

I am quite impressed with this well-written fan fiction. This could pose as a book on its own. I really enjoyed the storyline. I was glad at the fact that the story was about Hana and Namjoon’s love until the whole mafia was included in the story

Strengths & Weaknesses:

The story is what I would call a cliche troupe that has great potential. However, it all depends on the writing and you did it very well.

Recommendation:

Personally, this story is too good and well-written to be fan fiction.

I would suggest having this book for just Namjoon and Hana’s love, which takes almost 80% of the book. Because after chapters 40-45, it feels like I am reading an entirely different book.

You can have the mafia arc as another book which will dive deeper into the backgrounds of the other boys. It can even become a series that has each boy finding love with their profession.

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel