What's wrong with my fan
By ViniShah2

Title- 4/ 5

I think there are many books with somewhat similar names and after reading the title it seems that it's a story about a crazy fan of Taehyung but it's not that. So, I think the title is good if the reader reads the description of the story too, or you can change the title, something that I have in my mind is- My Fan is the Unexpected.

But in the end, it's all up to you to decide, I am just giving you a review.

Cover -3/ 5

I think you can take help with the cover, the creativity is nice like the chat bubble where it is written that I am your fan, author-nim, make the title more specifically shown out.

Blurb- ⅘

I like the blurb, it was short and it explained the thing that I was talking about earlier in the title section.

Description - 10/10

As for the 92 chapters so far, the story has gotten very smoothly, the author aka Bora has a fan which she finds annoying but after some time she took a liking of him but he is not the only one she is liking, she is also in love with the most handsome man aka Taehyung, one of her insecurity is that she hates liars because of her miserable past so how she reacts when she founds out that the boy who was her 'fan' is actually Taehyung, they get along after some time, Taehyung even created a song for Bora; Christmas Tree.

As a side story, Jungkook also likes to flirt with Bora's Friend, Princy and Princy starts to like him too.

Setting - 9/10

There is not much need of describing a setting in the story since it was mostly a chat based story.

Character description -5/5

The character description of characters was done nicely, like the time Bora explained how Taehyung looked with his moles, like it was a final touch-up by God.

Hook - 10/10

I don't like stories of readerxidol but this one is pretty nice and the hook if it is really captivating, I still am hooked to know what will happen next and what will happen with Jungkook and Princy.

Personal enjoyment - 10/10

Like I said just before this, I enjoyed this story a lot.

Plot - 10/10

The plot is really nice that they end up together I don't know how the world will take it if they were to be officially out or if rumours spread about them and they have to break up and it hasn't even been the end, so I can't really comment on that, but ever so far the plot is really nice.

Spellings/ Grammar - 7/10

There weren't any spelling mistakes except that time when Taehyung was drunk, I get it that you were trying to convey the message that he was drunk, I personally advise you to put a sentence like- he was unable to form proper sentences in this drunken state.

And after the spellings, you messed up in pronouns, there were times when you put she for her and him when you should put her. A time you also formed a sentence like- When will I get to meet me? When it was supposed to be When will I get to meet you?

But I don't think it makes much of a difference, your story is very captivating keep going<3

Review by iamjenlisasuperior