Book Information

Title: Behind the Veil: A Captive’s Tale

Author: katrina12234 katrina12234

Genre: Romance, Mafia, Fanfiction (BTS)

Chapters: 42 (Complete)

Target Audience: Young adults, 14-30

Summary:

**"Behind the Veil: A Captive's Tale"** unveils a thrilling and emotional journey set in the shadows of the criminal underworld.

When Hana, the daughter of a debt-ridden client, is taken by seven notorious mafia members, her world shifts from a life of uncertainty to one of imminent danger and intense scrutiny. Each of these men, known for their formidable reputations, harbors a deep-seated darkness and complex emotions hidden behind their ruthless exteriors.

Initially, Hana's fear is palpable, but as she becomes entangled in their world, she discovers a surprising tenderness beneath their hardened façades. What starts as captivity slowly evolves into a complex and passionate entanglement. The men who once represented terror begin to reveal their vulnerabilities, each showing a different facet of affection and care that leaves Hana both confused and captivated.

As Hana navigates her new reality, she uncovers the deep connections forming between her and her captors, while grappling with her own feelings of love and betrayal. The story takes unexpected turns when she becomes pregnant, intertwining her fate with these seven men in ways she never anticipated. Their growing affection contrasts sharply with the external dangers and the looming threat from her father's vengeful plans to reclaim her.

**"Behind the Veil: A Captive's Tale"** intricately weaves suspense and romance, keeping readers on edge as Hana's emotional journey unfolds. The narrative explores themes of trust, love, and redemption against a backdrop of danger and intrigue. With each chapter, the tension and stakes escalate, drawing readers into a world where love and loyalty are tested by the shadows of their pasts. Will Hana find solace and love in the unlikeliest of places, or will the shadows of their lives tear them apart?

(Description taken from source)

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Characters:

Hana is bold, intelligent and cautious. She knows how to think on her own. However she has secrets of her own. This allows her to fit well with the ranging personalities of the 7 boys. Each boy has a different, softer side to them beneath the hard and cold surface they present at work.

Writing Style:

The book is written in third person POV, however, the focus is mainly on Hana. This way, we see most of the story from Hana’s POV, when she is in the shot. Her emotions are shown and her relationship with the boys is based on what she feels or can interpret.

Spellings and Vocabulary: 10/10

Spelling and vocabulary is well written.

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Overall Impression:

At first read, I was very much impressed by the writing style and framework. It is very mature and well written. It doesn’t give the energy mostly seen in most fan-fiction. I actually found myself drawn into the story while forgetting that it was BTS-inspired.

Strengths & Weaknesses:

The story was written very well.

Recommendation:

I would suggest putting a disclaimer that this would end up in a polyamorous relationship, because some people may not be a fan.

Reviewed by Kanye_Ariel