Mysterious Island Secrets 

By - kimKaheva

Title - ⅘

It gives a good interpretation that there are secrets waiting to be unfold, so it's a nice one but it's quite common to use in Wattpad but still it's a nice one.

Cover - 4/5

The cover is quite captivating I must say. There are ships as aesthetic which gives an idea to the readers, I recommend you putting Y/N too because she is the main character I suppose.

Blurb - 3/5

The blurb is quite good to pique readers interest as to why mysterious things happen to them? Why can't they leave? Who's stopping them from leaving etcetera... but there are some grammatical errors like comma isn't used when it is needed. Apart from it, it is awesome.

Description - 5/5

The description of settings was well written by the author it gives a clear idea as to where they are and what is the surrounding around them.

Hook - 10/10. 

I was Hooked with this story because literally it's so mysterious, I wanted to know what is the thing holding them back from leaving the island. So the hook he author gave the reader's is perfect.

Personal Enjoyment - 10/10

I don't usually read Y/N's story but I gotta admit that this one is quite nice to begin with. I really enjoyed it a lot apart from some confusing sentences.

Plot - 8/10

The plot is quite good how in the end the guardian of island left the place thinking about what to do with other members aka Jimin and Taehyung, but I think that you could actually tell us who is making her do these tasks? Or why is she doing this etcetera.

Spelling/Grammar - 6/10

Spelling and Grammar mistakes were something off about this story. There were many spelling mistakes like 'spoke is fainted voice' when it should be 'in' instead, tools to fish ; tools for fishing, Let's fish over there; Let's do fishing over there, what is it happening; what is happening, Suddenly I heard the growl of my stomach was so loud; Suddenly I heard the growl of my stomach; it was so loud. Apart from this some misconceptions like Listening this my widen, my 'eyes' widen, The I said, 'then' I said, all-rounded, it should be all-rounder instead. 

There were many other mistakes like not leaving space after using the full stop.

Words of encouragement - 

Lastly I just wanted to say that you have the potential as a writer, just put more effort into it and you're all set for a big-hit, as a good writer you should proofread your chapters before letting them out of the drafts.

Reviewed by iamjenlisasuperior