Hello!

First of all, I would like to thank you for trying this book out! Being a high-school aged writer, any kind of recognition and feedback is appreciated!

With that, I would like to give a note; this is a very experimental style for me. I normally work with 1st person POV for starters, and this is my first time working with Mystery. So with that, please give feedback! Give reactions! Or predictions! It will all help me work on this style of writing; don't think anything is too stupid to comment; it's all appreciated!

And once again, thank you.

~Red (Not the Little One)