I'm not writing summaries of stories or talking about their overarching plots and vast structures  so much as delving in and critiquing them to help you improve. I'll give tips geared specifically for you, and a bit of an overview at the top about the story. Mostly this is a teaching thing, though.

I'll go over a bunch of things like setting, plot, worldbuilding, characters and rate them 1-10, and then talk about them, what I liked, what can be improved. I'll take small snippets of paragraphs and sentences and show you ways to restructure them and fix grammatical errors.

This is school time, the creative writing nerd edition, and if you want in, you need only knock on the front door.