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Please ignore grammatical mistakes,am not perfect like my sister in writing yup ,its edited by me on my sister's please .let me tell you she is injure but she is still a stubborn horse and pain in my ass, she threatened me you will type or not , and then me being innocent I was like yes , but yes am lucky to have her , thank you so much guys it was supportive to her after seeing your comments and that is reason she decided to update using me.

Please ignore grammatical mistakes and do lots of comment and don't forget to vote .and this half is edited by my sister already I have typed the other half hope you all enjoy my writing skills .this had to be a private one , but I don't know how to make it private .

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Precap - asad's rough treatment to fatema

ASAD'S OFFICE -

Asad pov - lost , this is what am going through her words ,she had the power to push me to the memories of my past , weak she made me feel how ? by making me realize that am empty without my noor by her words.by her words its clear she means no harm to me she has no plan to garb my attention to her .my heart it still tells that she can be my noor , but my mind tells she can be your noor but she is not your noor ,she can never replace and take your noor's place .

Avoid her , hate her , she is distraction to you ,she is sweet like honey but yet bees would hunt you , she is danger to your future .yes I will avoid fatema she cant break my love ,emotion , she cant break the wall which I built for my noor only she can break those walls and nourish me with her love .

XYZ JEWELLERS SHOP -

Fatema pov - I am in this jewellery shop , not for buying instead selling, yes I will sell my chain my ali got me on my birthday it has my name craved at the end , this is the only way I can hire a detective and find my ali , I have not sold the locket it is in my neck , yes am wearing that locket with a black thread this is the last memory of his which I cant loose .i have got 24,000 I just hope this amount do be enough to pay the detective.

Fatema was know walking along the streets of market , she was amazed to see a coulpe fighting over dress, the husband is adamant that he wont buy her any other pair of dress, his wife on otherside was buttering him .

Fatema pov- even I want to feel all this , but I never want all these materialistic things in my life I just want to feel his love for me .and that day would come soon .

ASAD OFFICE -

Asad - yes I had a deal with that jeweller MR. Shahwar but he didn't make his payment and am selfish when it comes to my things, I wont let anyone lift their eyes on my possession , and he thought he could take away all my money , bloody cheater .but I wont leave him .

Asad gets in his car and starts his engine to reach the jeweller .

Asad angrily walks in the XYZ JEWELLERS , by seeing him the owner trembles in fear because he knows ASAD ,if your loyal to him he would bless you with mercy , but cheat then he would show his enemity towards you and it wont end in good.

OWNER - asad sir As- salaam -alaikum

Asad-Wa- alakium salaam and sits on the chair , by putting his right ankle on left knee.

Asad - mr. shahwar , you remember we made a deal and according to that you have to pay my loan , but you didnt but yet I didn't bug you for my money , then don't you think its your responsibility that when you recover from your losses you should pay my money.

Owner wipes his forehead - yes sir, today I was coming to you

Asad mocks at him - oh really then you can give me right now , after all am here

Owner - yes sir

Owner collects all the money but it was less then his eyes fall on the chain which fatema sold it few hours back

Owner - I will tell him there is no cash and takes the chain and puts in the bag

Owner - sir your money

Asad - all cash right

Owner - no sir

Asd looks at him angrily

Owner - no no sir , I meant that still 20,000 was less so I replaced it with the chain .

Asad angrily opens the bag to be shocked

Asad pov - this chain , this was gifted to my noor by me then how did it end up here, was she here ?

Asad - this chain ?

Owner - few hours back a girl came her , I think she was in urgency of money she sold it here

Asad - for how much ?

Owner -20-25,000 why sir

Asad - and its market value is ?

Owner - same she was in need of money so I gave her the market value prize.

Asad - did you see her face ?? how was she looking?

Owner - sir , no she was wearing her burkha .

Asad - can you tell me at what time she came here ?

Owner - 3 hours back , you may find her in market .

Asad pov - my noor ,she is near to me she sold this chain what happened is she in some trouble ,oh no where shall I find you my noor ?but now I am sure that your in this city I will find you .

Asad then comes out of the market and runs in the market , soon it was raining but he didn't care he was just shouting her name , he was crying

ASAD'S HOUSE

Fatema was busy in cooking , but she was disturbed .

Fatema - why do I feel that some one is calling me ?no may be its my illusion finally I have money tomorrow I would go again and hire some detective , if i would not have studied then I don't think I could have find my ali ,thanks to all my ali if he would not have told me the importance of education then may be today I would have been crying sitting in a corner for him .i am very near to my destination.

ALLHA its raining now , at this time is it indication of unknown storm in my life ? please don't let my hopes sink and closes her eyes

EVENING 7 PM

Asad was totally wet . he was fisting the chain in his hands , disappointment ,anger was totally visible in his eyes , disappointment on himself that he could not find noor ,angry on himself that he could not help his noor she was in trouble and he was not with her .and his mind was flashing fatema's images .

Asad wears the chain in his neck and buttons up his shirt - the day I will met you I will make you wear this chain as symbol of our love , I wont let anyone come between us .

Asad walks into the house to find fatema setting the dinning table and his anger was on peak he wanted to burst out but he could not and then he remembers how she is messing his heart against his mind .

Asad shouts - how many times do I have to tell you , don't come infront of me , don't you understand no how will you understand you are illiterate , village girl .dont you have sense that if you don't obey to my words you can loose your job , now just get out of my house I want you out of my sight in ten minutes .

Asad walks away after shouting at fatema , fatema was now scared she was crying .

Fatema pov - no I cant loose this job , this is the only way I can be far from appi and khala and find ali , if I loose this job I know khala would kill me no, but where will I go at this time , am new here I dont know much places and I don't have money , I cant use that money , I will beg him hold his feet .

For my updates the book , stay tuned to my sister's IG ACCOUNT .For few days she wont be updating any promo's due to her hand injuries , but she would keep you updated that when she is gonna update .

Thanks to all for supporting my sista in her tough situations , just pray that her stitches should be opened soon and she can use her mouth and talk ,eat .

HEALTH TIP - this would be continued by my sister soon , as she can only write this , but guys do try her tips they are very effective and I even listen to her , salute to you sista because she manages everything studying , writing , then health care, helps me during my studies, helps mom she is one energetic horse with positive aura around her , this chappy would be once again edited by her .

How was the chappy ?what will happen next ( evil laugh )?

Few words for asad?

Few words for fatema ?

SHALL I TELL YOU A SECRET , NEXT PART IS ALSO EDITED AND SHE HAS IT IN HER BACK UP DOCUMENT ,SHE WOULD UPDATE THAT PART ON SATURDAY ITS ACTUALLY A SURPRISE TO ALL BUT I DONT LIKE SURPRISES .

Everyone

Take care ,

Bye .