CatKate7

Best thing I ever wrote. Best thing I ever will write. And I wasn't even that good at writing at the time. Also beta Ashley was hardcore. And I think this is when I stopped putting music on top of my chapters because I realized you weren't listening to any of them.

Fandom: Attack on Titan

-3rd person P.O.V-

Ashley sighed as she put the rope around her neck.

She stared emotionless at the door as she listened to her best friend- her sister banging on it yelling for Ashley to open it.

But she wasn't.

What would be the point for her too?

So she could live another emotionless day in a meaningless life?

She didn't even feel the slightest bit of care of who this would affect.

She was a monster.

She wanted to die. And if the world wasn't going to do it. She'll do it herself.

. . . . How did she get here?

~Flashback~

A little girl with pure white hair and sparkling light blue eyes ran towards a woman with similar features but older.

Behind her was another little girl ran to the women.

She looked around the same age as her but with black hair though having the same blue eyes.

"Mummy!! Mummy!!" The small girl with black hair called as she was able to run past the first one with white hair.

The woman turned around smiling at the two small running girls. She bent down a bit to pick up the smiling black haired one.

"Hey, Kaitlyn!! How was your day at school"

"It was great," Katelyn (I spelled your name wrong here and I'm still fixing it) said after her mother put her down.

Both females turn back to the white-haired girl who seemed to have an emotionless face as she ran towards them.

She didn't even seem like she was trying.

As she got there a man with black hair and blue eyes came out of the small home the woman was standing next to.

He also had an emotionless face . . . . (Damn past me, ever heard of show dont tell?)

She hugged him "Hello father" she spoke softly. He hugged her back "Hello Ashley"

~Flashback Over~

(I just got to the end of the song at the beginning. It sucks and I have poor taste)

-3rd person P.O.V-

So... maybe it was inherited to not feel anything...but if that was the case...

Why didn't Kaitlyn get it?

Why was she the only one being punished?

Why didn't she get her mother's happiness and joy and innocence!? (And the skill to stop over using the word 'and' and adding commas)

SHE LOOKS MORE LIKE HER THEN KAITLYN DID!!!

. . . . But they acted nothing alike

(Who put spaces in between their periods but have more than three?)

~Flashback~

Ashley watched as her mother cleanly sliced through tomatoes and other vegetables.

Her mother looked back in her and smiled

"I didn't know you were into cooking Ashley," She said cheerfully

Ashley just merely to hummed in response.

But it was in the cooking she was interested in.

It was a knife . . . .

(I like how at the beginning I said this was the best serious and sad story I ever wrote but I'm criticizing it)