Alright! This two chapter story was written by @laney1728 go check it out! Sorry I couldn't update this sooner, but I had to work two days straight finishing that last review. Whew!

Chapter One

-Ooh, party!

-I'm sure if I could pronounce the name of, uh, horse manure? I'm sure it would be delicious! 

-Oh, I like that part, the most beautiful woman being his wife, that's sweet.

-Just you wait until the child is old enough to perceive dad jokes.

-"Kathryn could be a captain!" -Tori Vega

-Oh, you snuck your own bottle? Heh.

-Oh, that's sad. That's an awful sight to see, ain't it?

-Is this ship docked? Who's driving this flying umbrella if our captain's up to her neck in synthehol?

-Woah, captain's helm just became the high school supply closet!

-Uh, what were you supposed to be tasting? Cinnabon chapstick?

-What about that iceberg dead ahead? Will that get your attention?

-Woah! What...happened? He's gone, he... Huh. No wonder you didn't taste anything.

-Hey, that's just what the hologram said! Too bad that iceberg ain't a hologram.

-Wait...don't tell me....is this, a spaceship? Oh, hell yeah!

Chapter Two

-"Meet our crew. Ayala, Icheb, B'Elanna, Chakotay, Chispolinkeyeovnaparovich, and of course, our most important and beloved, Tom."
-It is a spaceship! Nice!

-As soon as they danced, I knew they'd get together!

Okay, that was really good! The writing was well done, the characters were likable even for the short time we've known them. I like not realizing it was a spaceship until a little bit later, that was a nice touch. But I probably should have figured it out when Star Trek is one of the tags, and the Voyager was in the description, (im a bit dumm in case anyone wuz wonderin'). The ending was sweet, a good way to end a sad little tale. I like the layout of the story, it was set up and introduced very well. A great job!