Heaven In Hell Review!
This is a request from win_fryxxx
Chapter One
-Not much time to live?? Oh no, poor thing!
-Oh...recovered, wonderful!
-Yeah, sickness is taxing in every way.
-Vegetable stand, that's my home.
-Uh oh....when your parents don't tell you things that means something bad is happening...
-Hey, sir, I get it. I love tea.
-Seeing you do what??? You're a strange man, what are you doing here??
Chapter Two
-I would hate to leave my home without a choice, what an awful situation!
-I...I'm sorry, sir, a WHAT?
-*cough*
-His smile would not make me feel less tense, what do you mean demons??
Chapter Three
-Ooh, a present!
-Aw, I've always wanted a comb for my hair.
-Small...box with a...ring?
-Oh, herbs, thank goodness. Let's smoke up!
-I hope that colleague won't give us any trouble.
-And...what sort of tasks would those be? Think about it??
Chapter Four
-Yeah, the parents here are very at fault for not saying anything about what's happening.
-Aren't we supposed to stay inside at night, sir?? Demons???
-Uh....couldn't I battle the demon instead?
-Maybe he has an office job where they brag about their "assets".
Final thoughts:
Well, this was an interesting story. I like that there's no exposition or long winded explanations, I like that things are revealed very slowly. Overall pretty good!
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