Miraculous Ladybug Fanfic of the Week

Title: Who Is In Control

Author: sinnimonbun

Ship Pairing: Ladynoir/Adrinette/Marichat/Ladrien (not really specified in summary but obvious in story)

Summary:
What happens when marinette is akumitized? Will chat be able to save her? Possible identity reveal.

(ps they have the names lowercase like that and akumatized is spelled akumitized)

Review from GameCentralStation:
This book had a good plot line at first, but I was thrown off a little by the grammar and spelling mistakes (there were enough to notice) and the spacing of lines (dialogue wasn't properly spaced out, etc.). However, these things might not bother everyone. The story was very interesting, since it's always interesting to see stories about Marinette getting akumatized. The author mentioned writer's block a lot and in one chapter brought in two OC's, which was kind of confusing. And in the next chapter or two they skipped ahead 10 years, which kind of threw me off. Overall, it's a good story but the plot line could need a little work along with editing, although the story isn't completed yet so these changes could come in the future!

Comments left on that book from readers:
"This is great! just a few grammar and spelling errors but other than that it was amazing :) keep up the awesome work!!"-YEDgirl980

"PUUUUNNNSSSS"-fangirls_too_much

"It's really good! I love the plot line!"-Danalpswolf