⚠May be offensive to some writers⚠
This is a short bit of story and I will be changing the wording to tell you what annoys me.

OK.  Fanfictions.  There are a bunch here on Wattpad.  Stories about what could have happened too a character or what you want to happen in an upcoming book.  Let me just say this now– THEY ARE REALLY CLICHÉ.

Wow.  Don't know where that came from.  Oh wait.  I do. 

1) Some OCs just make me so annoyed.  Most are described vividly, but in an annoying manner.  There is a thing as too much description.

Ex:  Karissa Cassil was a very normal girl.  She had bright blonde hair with twelve pink streaks turning into a purple at the bottom.  Karissa had a light dusting of freckles across her cheeks and a small nose. 

Her eyes were a purple, but changed color depending on her mood.  When she was angry, they became almost red, and when she was calm, her eyes became a pale pink. But most of the times it was purple with gold bits.  Her teeth were straight; she had never needed to use braces. 

She got out of bed and opened her wardrobe.  Moving her eyes across the many outfits, she found a cut yellow crop top with a sparkly flower on it.  Putting of over a black tank top with a v-neck, she went too find some jeans.  The jeans were white with a rip on the knee and one on her calf.  On the other leg,  there was another rip on the side of her thigh.

That was a example of too much description. 

2)  People who write in chunks.

We all know these people.  We've all read there stories– we may even be that person.  They usually give the excuse that they are on mobile and of is hard to write with a screen.  Let me tell you:  I am writing this on my kindle, and my story, Out of Time, is written on my kindle too.  I had no problem switching the keyboards and using my thumbs. 

They also write things that go too fast with little descriptions and words.  I know, I know, I am one of those people who need to describe more, and trust me, I have been working on it.

Ex:
Karissa Cassil got out of bed late for school. "oh no.  Im late."  She jumped out of bed and combed her messy hair.  It was almost 9.00 and her school started at 7:45. Grabbing her backpack she raced downstairs.  "Hi Karissa."  Her dad said. "Ugh.  Dad, I'm late for school and you have to drive so hurry up."  He nodded and got the keys.  When she to school she raced inside her class.  The teacher wasn't there so she sat next to her fried Brianna.  "Hey."  She whispered.  "Sorry I'm late.  My dad forgot to wake me up."  Bri  nodded and pulled out a pencil. For notes.  Grabbing her binder, Karissa grabbed a pencil and good to work on the homework for the day.   The bell rang.She went to her next class.  "By bri. I'll see you at lunch."

3)  People who only have girls as main characters.  OK.  YOU PEOPLE NEED TO HAVE MORE GUY CHARACTERS.  There are way to many girl OCs.  Honestly, I need a decent fanfic that has a main character.  Any recommendations?

If you roll play, you should have at least one guy OC.  Or a girl who isn't over powered.