Author: zumbalove

Title: 4/5 - This is a strange choice for a title but I gotta give it to you; it's totally unique and creative.

Cover: 4/5 - It's kinda plain and I don't really feel anything when I look at it but it suits your idea and it works.

Synopsis: 0/5 - There wasn't one but considering this is a compilation of short stories from different genres, I didn't expect there to be. (I won't add this to your total at the end.)

Plot: 5/5 - I loved the idea, you had me chortling all the way through. This was definitely an interesting story and I did want to read more. (Unfortunately, that was it but hey, you have a good style of writing.) It was very short in my opinion but it was amazing.

Characters: 5/5 - June is quite sassy and I enjoyed reading this as a result. Her 'voice' was interesting to read and there wasn't a dull moment. The witty dialogue between your characters was hilarious but at times I was left thinking what the hell? But in a good way. You portrayed Damon's jerkness really well and that came across to me as a reader. I was able to connect with June and I felt sorry for the crap he was pulling. At the same time, I was cracking up.

SPG: 4/5 - Your story flowed well however I think you may have a few typos and misplaced commas and such. It's nothing major, a good proofreading should clear that right up.

OVERALL: This was an engaging story, albeit very short. I felt like the beginning was a tad boring (A bit too much telling) but the more I read, the better it got and by the end, I was wanting more.

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES

TOTAL RATING: 22/25