SYNOPSIS:

In which two boys bond over a bottle of vodka and maybe fall a little bit in love.

GENRE: TEEN FICTION

Author: Shaniamr

Title: 5/5 - I like it. There isn't anything to say other than there aren't stories with the same title as you so points for creativity and originality. 

Cover: 5/5 - I love the teen fic feel I'm getting from the cover (reflects your genre) and I can immediately tell it will have two boys going through some kind of relationship. The subtitle is actually very well suited to the story and adds to the appeal. 

Synopsis: 1/5 - I don't like synopses that start with 'in which'. Also, you haven't given me much to go on so I don't know what direction the story will go in. It's too vague, I suggest you add more, eg, make it a paragraph length. 

Plot: 4/5 - I think the plot is a tad fast paced. This is mainly because you lack some of the finer description details such as how the class are reacting, how the MC is feeling, and maybe why he hates maths and the school's education system so much. 

Having said that, I think that your MC is an interesting character and I'd love to see what happens next.

Characters: 4/5 - Dang, your MC is sassy. While the student and teacher give valid points, I find it very unrealistic for him to have been able to swear/ yell at the teacher without an immediate response. I know if I tried to do that in my school, I would be yelled at by my teachers for foul language. 

SPG: 5/5 - There were literally no errors that I could find which made this really easy to read as there were no pesky mistakes that took away from the awesomeness that is this story. 

One thing I would like to point out is that you say 'Chapter 1' I don't really think the 'chapter 1' part is necessary. I think we all know that it's chapter 1 based on the '1.0' title of the chapter. 

OVERALL: This is a great start to your book. You've introduced a strong main lead and seeing as this is a romance, I'm hoping the second male will be popping up soon? 

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES 

TOTAL RATING: 24/30