Author: SumireHime

Title: 5/5 - The name 'Angelface' is hella weird and that alone would make me want to read your story.

Cover: 3/5 - It's beautiful, clearly hand drawn which is cool but it doesn't stand out much. Having said that, it is really artistic and unique so props to you.

Synopsis: 4/5 - I did spot a few punctuation error such as the lack of commas here and there. It is very gripping and does entice the reader (me) to, well, read the story.

Plot: 5/5 - Definitely promising. It was a short scene but I was hooked all the way through till the end which is great.

Characters: 5/5 - No clue what the MC's name is but wow! I loved the way you portrayed her, she sounds strong and determined but also a little helpless and resentful because of the colour thing. You made her come ALIVE. No 2D characters for you!

SPG: 4/5 - I understand that this is the dialect that your character speaks which loved by the way, however I found it hard to follow at times and had to re-read it a few times.

OVERALL: I thought it was pretty well written and I'd say carry on with this story. It was definitely interesting and I was hooked right till the end

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES

TOTAL RATING: 26/30