Author: crimsym

Title: 5/5 - I love it! I'm instantly intrigued and want to know more about the story.

Cover: 4/5 - A very interesting cover choice. Plain but effective, I like it.

Synopsis: 4/5 - A promising blurb! Definitely makes me want to know more. The only thing I have to say is watch your punctuation, there were a few misplaced commas. Also, you could maybe add something to separate the first sentence and the rest of it. Eg, (---)

Plot: 5/5 - Amazing idea! I love how you throw us directly into the action, you didn't have a drab opening with I'm used to reading about which was very refreshing. The story flowed well and I was engaged all the way through. (Literally sitting on the edge of my seat and biting my nails while I anxiously wait for what happens next.) Your descriptions were beautiful and that added to your story which made it a very enjoyable read.

Characters: 5/5 - You brought Aurora to life. I was able to connect to her throughout the chapter and I was stressing about whether she would live or die. The mysterious dude - hot damn! I want to know more about him. Way to end on a cliffhanger! You effortlessly created a suspenseful zombie chase scene and and hilarious banter between your MC and the dude. I also didn't mind reading her thought processing, she seems like a very interesting character.

SPG: 5/5 - I wasn't able to pick out any obvious mistakes and the story flowed real well.

OVERALL: This was an incredible first chapter, absolutely flawless. I literally have nothing else to say about it.

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES

TOTAL RATING: 28/30