Author: underworlders

Title: 5/5 - I love it! Enough said. It's gripping and I like the twist on the fairytale 'The boy who cried wolf' so I'm instantly intrigued as to what this story could be about.

Cover: 5/5 - It's a very beautiful cover, I like the pictured used and the arrangement on the cover. It works really well with your chosen genre.

Synopsis: 4/5 - I like how you explain just the right amount of information to the reader to keep them interested. I instantly want to know why she needs to protect her sister and what the deal is with the lycans.

Plot: 5/5 - This flows very well and you have a solid plot which is marginally expressed here but it keeps me interested (you have direction which is a plus). Again, I'm left with questions; What does your MC have against Beth's boyfriend and why she is in such a hurry.

Characters: 5/5 - Your MC is definitely resourceful (no one likes them dumb =) ) and I liked that about her. Especially where she bribes the cabbie to escape, that was a funny moment. Kyle is so damn adorable, I love the way you portrayed him and all the others, they have depth to them and are not two dimensional.

SPG: 5/5 - I didn't find any errors when reading this chapter (I'm a bit of a grammar nazi sometimes so that was a good thing) however I'm thinking you may have forgotten a 'to' when talking about how Kyle scooped out the m&ms. If you reread that part, I'm sure you'll understand what I mean.

OVERALL: I thoroughly enjoyed reading this chapter, was flawlessly written and my interest was piqued all the way through.

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES

TOTAL RATING: 29/30