Author: Lovely_Potatoe_King

Title: 5/5 - 'Night' makes me think lots of things about what it could be and genre wise, it suits well.

Cover: 5/5 - It's simple but effective, I like it.

Synopsis: 3/5 - My main issue with this is that it doesn't intrigue me, I feel like it doesn't do your story justice. (I know you have the ability to write an amazing one - this story is in a world of it's own) I suggest trying to rewrite it or add more description.

Plot: 4/5 - I love the story so far, it's well written. I like how you vaguely gloss over the dead people on the streets like it's normal for them to be there and it makes me want to know why. I would like more information about the diner though but otherwise, this was a very good start to your story.

Characters: 5/5 - I am liking your MC so far, he's very interesting. I love how you tell us he's ill but not what is causing it (keeping the mystery alive). He has a very resigned tone and it makes me want to know what is going on.

SPG: 5/5 - I didn't find any obvious mistakes which made reading your story that much more enjoyable.

OVERALL: I think you have an amazing idea, you can do so much with it. You have a very likeable and interesting MC which kept me reading all the way through. I loved the creepy vibe I got from this chapter. However, I feel like you could add more description to the story for instance, the clatter in the kitchen. It was like, meh whatever. So knowing more about that would have been nice.

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES

TOTAL RATING: 27/30