Author: anirrelevantsaucepan

Title: 5/5 - I love it, enough said.

Cover: 3/5 - I'm not crazy about your cover. I think the writing looks a bit tacky if I'm completely honest. It's an okay cover but I don't feel it does your story justice.

Synopsis: 5/5 - It immediately grabs my attention. Definitely makes me want to read on.

Plot: 5/5 - I love the plot so far, it was short and sweet. You didn't throw out too much information but just enough to keep readers wanting to know more. I thought you ended the chapter beautifully.

Characters: 5/5 - I think the development of 'Karma' was done incredibly well in the first chapter. I loved the personification of karma as it were. The part where she snaps his neck was cool in a morbid way. I loved how she kills him with her hands and not with the knife because that would have just been tacky and not at all how karma should work.

SPG: 4/5 - (I don't say/type ect swear words) 'You f***ing know that you s***face' makes absolutely no sense to me, maybe I'm reading it wrong? There were other parts that didn't sound quite right when I was reading it and it sort of disrupted the flow but a good proofread should clear that right up.

OVERALL: Your first chapter was amazing. I was enthralled throughout the first chapter. The idea is unique and refreshing - Considering the fact that I have read so many books, that's saying something.

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES

TOTAL RATING: 27/30