Author: cakeclockwork

Title: 5/5 - It is an interesting title (Lol a cinema is called Genesis) anyways, it makes me think sci-fi immediately which it what I'm assuming you're going for so you did that well. 

Cover: 4/5 - I have mixed feelings about this cover. I'm not quite sure if I like it but that could just be because the genre holds no interest to me. However I do like the colour of the text and the font so that is why I gave you a 4.

Synopsis: 2/5 - It's not much of a synopsis. It's good, don't get me wrong, it just doesn't grip me and make me want to click on the story to read it. I think that is because it sounds too much like part of the actual story. Your synopsis needs to be short (or any length really, as long as it's engaging) and make me want to read on. Unfortunately, yours lacked this. You can rectify this by creating a new synopsis (and maybe keeping this as background info) that has more mystery to it and leaves me with questions.

Plot: 5/5 - You have an amazing plot and it was written beautifully. The pace was set just right and the descriptions made this chapter even better.

Characters: 5/5 - I like your MC. (Not quite sure if it's a he or a she tbh because you did say skirt) anyways, I liked the character.

Also, the friend (Ben, I think his name was) is also pretty cool.

You introduced just your MC and Ben here which meant that I wasn't lost and was able to keep track of everyone.

SPG: 5/5 - This was written very well. I couldn't find any mistakes which made this quite a pleasurable read.

OVERALL: To be completely honest with you, I was a little apprehensive when I clicked on it to read. However, I was immediately sucked it. This story was amazing. I loved it.

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES

TOTAL RATING: 26/30