Author: ggspernza

Title: 4/5 - It's a bit long for a title but somehow you make it work. It definitely suits your genre and from the title alone, I'm hooked and I want to read more.

Cover: 5/5 - I love this cover, it's just perfect. I have absolutely nothing to say about it.

Synopsis: 4/5 - This is an interesting synopsis, I'm hooked. It's a bit on the long side (maybe see if you can shorten it a little.)

Plot: 3/5 - You are doing more telling than showing so some parts are a little like, well, bleh. For instance, don't tell us this is how the boys act, show us. Don't limit yourself with the girl saying it. You set the scene around the characters not the characters creating the scene. In the beginning, you say that Bella said said something again but you never told us when she said it the first time. I found that you had a few inconsistencies and plot holes here and there but reading through it should help you clear this.

Characters: 3/5 - I thought that the band's characters were a little cookie-cutter, a tad too stereotypical as it were. Of course, if that's your angle then t makes sense but still, give them some individuality. Charlotte seems like an interesting character, just build up on her awesomeness and you're good.

SPG: 4/5 - Generally, this area was very. I suggest you just go over it a couple of times to remove the smaller mistakes that kind of disrupted the flow of your story. Also, thoughts should be expressed sing italics, not this: ''

OVERALL: Personally, I didn't like this story due to it's similarities (which was probably accidental) to the stage dive books by Kylie Scott. However personal feelings aside, you have a good idea and a promising story. Just focus on the plot holes and I'm sure it will be an awesome story.

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES

TOTAL RATING: 23/30