Author: Dragongirl6

Title: 5/5 - It's a weird title. I'm assuming it's half vampire, right? But it has the desired effect and I do want to read on and see what the story is about.

Cover: 3/5 - I don't really like this cover. I think the text doesn't suit and the picture is a little bland. However I think changing the text should make the whole thing look better.

Synopsis: 4/5 - This is a somewhat interesting synopsis. I think you could add a little more to it to make it completely awesome but it's good. Your first sentence doesn't make sense. You are missing something (like a word) here. So maybe change it to 'A dark and dangerous romance ignites between Kate, a full blood, and a mysterious stranger she meets/met one night.

The comma is not needed. (Google how to use them properly, it will explain it better than I ever could)

Plot: 5/5 - An interesting plot so far. I liked how well developed it was. The pace was running at the right speed, not too fast, not too slow but just right.

Characters: 5/5 - You MC has a strong voice. She's also smart, which I like in my heroines. I like the way she acts especially when she smelled  that other dude; she controlled the hunger.

SPG: 4/5 - This section needs to be looked over. It was almost a perfect chapter but I spotted two main mistakes.

-Dialogue ending with a comma must be followed with a lower case tag. Eg, "Hi," she said. Not "Hi," She said or even "Hi." She said.

-Your commas are all over the place so maybe think about fixing that. Try reading it out loud, that usually helps me spot where my errors are. 

OVERALL: This was an amazing first chapter. I loved your MC and the way she acted. I also loved how you didn't introduce that many characters so I wasn't lost. Definitely keep writing. This is an innovative and creative idea.

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES

TOTAL RATING: 27/30