Author: BringMeTheEpicness

Title: 4/5 - God of death! I do find it a tad odd that you'd name a teen fic story something so morbid but after reading the first chapter, I can see that it's because of the band name. Otherwise, I just don't think it sounds right.

Cover: 4/5 - It's a good cover. I like the placement of everything.

Synopsis: 4/5 - It's an okay blurb. It could be written better though (I've read your work and you definitely have the ability).

Plot: 5/5 - So far, nothing has happened but it flows well which is good.

Characters: 5/5 - I love how your characters aren't 2D like some books I read. Your MC has a good and interesting 'voice', I wasn't bored at all when I was reading it.

SPG: 4/5 - This section was practically flawless. My only issue is that the paragraph where the teacher is talking is too long. You could maybe split this up a little bit, add some gestures, explain what tone of voice she's using, what the students are doing at the back of the room. This adds more detail and sets the scene a little more for your readers. Also, I'm not quite sure if this was a typo or whatever: If there are 30 students and they split off into groups of 5, there will be 6 groups in total, not 4 like you said in the chapter. (Again, I'm not sure if it's a typo but I'm pointing it out anyway.)

OVERALL: This was a sweet chapter, I would definitely want to know more about your characters and their relationships with each other. A very unique approach, well done.

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES

TOTAL RATING: 26/30