Author: Reckless_Ignorance

Title: 4/5 - It's an okay title, kind of misleading because I'd think it's about fallen angels or something but it's actually about vampires.

Cover: 3/5 - It's a good cover but I don't feel like it reflects your story. The synopsis is kinda violent and that just doesn't go well with the cover.

Synopsis: 5/5 - WOW! Hot damn, I enjoyed reading that. My interest was piqued and I wanted to know more.

Plot: 5/5 - This was a short but sweet chapter. You introduce the characters but keep the cloud of mystery over where they are going and that makes me want to read on.

Characters: 5/5 - Tucker is such an unusual name for a vampire, I kinda want to know his story. Is he an old one, new? What's the connection between him and your MC.

SPG: 4/5 - I caught some errors when I was reading. There were some lower case when upper case was needed, a good proofread should help you. For example, when you end a dialogue with a full stop, the thing that comes after must start with an uppercase. Eg: 'Hi,' she said / 'Hi.' She said. (See what I did there?)

OVERALL: This was a good chapter. There is a sense of mystery which I liked. The pace was good, it flowed well.

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES

TOTAL RATING: 26/30