Author: Amara_Sky

Title: 4/5 - I love the title, it kinda sets the tone of the story a little

Cover: 4/5 - I like it, it's quite cool

Synopsis: 4/5 - This is gripping and definitely hooks the reader. I would suggest that you break it up a little as block texts can be a little long to read on the app and my 3 second fish brain would get tired. Other than that, I think it was written well with enough mystery

Plot: 5/5 - The idea is pretty strong and you have withheld the right about of information which keeps the reader intrigued. This is a very good way to open your story (nailed it)

Characters: 3/5 - Your MC sounds like she's suffering from an existential disorder but somehow it works. Her voice is clear and controlled, like she knows what's going on and has lost hope. It's definitely a cool way to paint your character so props to you for making that work

SPG: 5/5 No faults anywhere, at least that I could see. Your grammar is on point which is awesome because people generally enjoy reading stories with good SPG (I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi so you did well)

OVERALL: I think it's a really good story so well done for that. I do suggest you carry on as you have a solid plot line. However I would recommend that you remove the 'who am I, what am I doing' part because it disrupts the flow (which is awesome by the way, that little part is like a road bump - it doesn't fit in my humble opinion)

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES

TOTAL RATING: 25/30