Author: loveneverends33

Title: 5/5 - A really interesting choice here. I do like it and it immediately piques my interest.

Cover: 5/5 - I love this cover. It's very blue which I think works really well (what with your title being about a blue haired beauty and all.) I love the placement of the image and the font of the text. It all comes together to create quite a seamless cover.

Synopsis: 5/5 - This is written so flawlessly, I literally have nothing to say other than the person who wrote it for you is amazing. It gives a little bit of juicy information, just enough to keep me wanting more.

Plot: 5/5 - Oh Shoot! I was so engrossed in the story I forgot that I was supposed to review it. So I basically had to read it again :)

I loved the way you started the chapter, straight into the action. I honestly thought something else was going on until you revealed that it was all a video game.

Your plot is moving at a good pace, not too fast or slow (having said that, some places do need a little more description to make it just that more greater than it already is.)

Characters: 5/5 - You have introduced all your characters perfectly to the point where they feel like real people. I think your MC is very witty and has an interesting voice.

Clearly they all know each other very well but we don't get any time frames so it's sort of hard to know how long they've know each other for. It is a little cliched but based on how well you executed this chapter, I have no doubt that your plot will be anything but cliched.

SPG: 4/5 - You had some choppy sentences here and there, nothing too major. Your spelling and grammar were impeccable, one of the better stories I've read on wattpad, no doubt. 

-'I started to growl him'? this makes no sense. I can understand what you mean but maybe you're missing some words or something?

OVERALL: This was a very gripping start to your story. You throw the reader in so they feel like they have no choice but to read on and find out more about these characters of yours. Really well done.

WOULD I RECOMMEND: HELL YEAH

TOTAL RATING: 29/30