Author: Shipwreck_12

Title: 5/5 - Very snazzy, I like it. For some reason, it sounds odd to me, like 'Against the tide' would sound better. But who am I to criticize your creativity.

Cover: 5/5 - I think the cover goes well with your chosen genre. It's simple yet perfect.

Synopsis: 4/5 - I like it, it pulls me in and I want to know more about you character.

Plot: 5/5 - Good descriptions, they really enhance your chapter. The story flows smoothly which makes it a pleasure to read.

Characters: 5/5 - I loved the interactions between your MC and the boy (she is totally gonna see him again ;) ). You were able to create your characters in such a way that they come alive. The dialogue between them was hilarious and I felt sorry for her.

SPG: 4/5 - I noticed a few misplaced commas here and there. A good proofread and you should be able to spot them. Also, when the boy is calling her 'clumsy', that kinda becomes the noun so it should be 'Clumsy' when he's addressing her.

OVERALL: This was a very engaging chapter. I felt sorry for your MC all the way through and cracking up at certain parts. This is exactly what I'm looking for in a story. Well done.

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES

TOTAL RATING: 28/30