Author: ESylva

Title: 5/5 - It sounds a little thriller-esque which is pretty cool. A very interesting title, it draws my attention.

Cover: 4/5 - It's a good cover but it doesn't scream mystery to me. It also doesn't stand out. I would suggest you create a new one, it wouldn't hurt.

Synopsis: 3/5 - It is very intriguing but very short. The title draws me in but the synopsis is a little bit of a let down considering how well you write. Good start though, you can definitely add more to this. 

Plot: 5/5 - I absolutely love the idea so far, you haven't revealed much but enough to get me wondering about her past and who she was before she became a nurse. I would read on based on your first chapter, you have used two extremes and it interests me to see how this came to pass.

Characters: 5/5 - I love Blair, she sounds so sassy and interesting. Not a drab character at all, she has LIFE. I love her voice, it's snarky so props to you for making that work. You showed just a hint of side characters but I also liked them. You haven't introduced too many new characters which is good because it can sometimes get confusing trying to remember who's who.

SPG: 5/5 - There were no mistakes that I could spot which I loved. It made your writing flow really well.

OVERALL: I thought that this was very well written. Definitely piqued my interest however the transition from her old life as a 'prostitute' to the new one as a nurse wasn't very clear to me and I was quite confused. Other than that, this was a very enjoyable read.

WOULD I RECOMMEND: YES

TOTAL RATING: 27/30