~ -luvanth 

i so love this line! some might've not encountered lisa's experiences (here in the story) in real life (like me), but i believe that at some point this line captured their hearts. that's how it went for me with this line ♡

hi dearest dove, this is vminfairy , your head chef and i hope ü enjoy your order ♡

[ 2020 review credits to hoelysprite aka vminfairy ]

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Course 7 : Choco Mountain Ice Cream

"LETTERS FOR YOU." by @-luvanth

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1. Hors d'oeuvres ( 2 / 5 )

i just feel like the cover is too simple. i do agree that simplicity is indeed beautiful but to attract readers, i guess we should add a little twist to it. i'd also suggest a photo that is more connected to the story. <3

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2. Soup ( 8 / 10 )

Title : Letters For You.

Description :

the title is not that rare but also not that overused. what caught my attention is that little dot at the end of the title. it made an intimidating impression to me, im not lying. perhaps, that's a good thing? because i was then intrigued.

as for the description, it's short but it kinda hinted how the story will go. it's okay for me but whenever we do descriptions we should also give the readers a reason why they should take a look at our work. take this as an example, a lot of romance stories that are ill-fated are out there, what makes yours different that i should read it? mayhaps, giving more details about it will do the trick.

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3. Salad ( 5 / 5 )

the first chapter got me squinting my eyes (in a good way) while reading. the way the first letter explained what's currently happening in the story is a new approach for me. it sorta felt like i started the story in the very middle but the first chapter made up for it perfectly.

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4. Main Dish ( 13 / 15 )

on one hand, i was already expecting a sad ending. aside from the fact that i hope it was (cause im a sucker for sad endings), if u'll look closely into the foreshadows of the story, i already expected the ending to be heart-wrenching TT. on the other hand, i wasn't expecting the reason why they can't be together, that was really a shock and great job on that! reading it was a rollercoaster ride, u know that feeling where you're already expecting something sad to happen but a part of u also hope for a good outcome. it felt like that while i was reading it!

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5. Palate Cleanser ( 14. 5 / 15 )

you write too narratively (which is awesome). but since the work is an epistolary novel, i was expecting a few poetic sprinkles on it (i.e., with the choice of your words and the likes). nevertheless, the way you write is still on point. the events were planned really well and id say that you really know what u were writing and the whole thing is so neat!

on the latter part of grammar and punctuation, yes folks i came back here empty-handed. i actually read the book twice to make sure that i didn't pass by any typos or grammar errors to point out to you, but instead, i got another round of the whole rollercoaster plot. you really did a very great job at editing and all!

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6. 2nd Main Dish ( 7.5 / 10 )

i'd be lying if i say that i don't want more of jk's side of the story. well, i needed it. although the pov's changed just once or twice, u managed to portray how each character reply to the letters. lisa's character was well introduced and developed throughout the story and as for jk, his personalities as a fictional character wasn't quite shown. the epilogue gave light to his character but there are still questions that are lingering inside my head about him. like what made him think that she wouldn't love him once he turns blind? if more of his character was shown, perhaps, id be able to have a deeper understanding as to why he decided to let her go that way.

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7. Dessert ( 5 / 5 )

my... my heart hurts for the characters! but to someone like me, that isn't a bad thing. i have an odd liking of stories and movies that make me feel emotions that im not supposed to.

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+ Wine ( 4 / 5 )

i really love how neat everything is. it's really pleasant to the eyes. but i think readers would want to hear something from you (?) im not one to complain tho, t'was a great story and i had fun reading it ♡

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TOTAL = 59 / 70

bon appetit! we hope you enjoyed your order here at fairesto ♡ if ever you have clarifications, questions, or objections about the review always remember that we could always talk about it over a scrumptious meal (aka through dm's).

thank you for ordering, dear dove ! have a lovely day ahead ~

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"fate brought us together, and im willing to bet fate dictates that we will stay forever"

Letters For You. by -luvanth