~ theJeNation

what i like about this line is that it contradicted the title itself. of course, those who haven't read the actual book wouldn't understand. and for that part, it's for u to know, go read it!

hi dearest jena, this is vminfairy, your head chef and i hope ü enjoy your order ♡

[ 2020 review credits to hoelysprite aka vminfairy  ]

Course 10 : Vegan Truffles 

"Euphoria L'Disparaitre" by @theJeNation

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1. Hors d'oeuvres ( 4.5 / 5 )

the edit is superb! it gives off the vibes of the story and i like that, especially the filter. the little scribbles on the photo look good on it too. my only concern is that it confused me a little about the title. nevertheless, i based it on your order form. other than that, well done!

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2. Soup ( 6 / 10 )

Title : Euphoria L'Disparaitre

Description :

for me, the title is absolutely catchy (although i don't know how to pronounce it). but as a very curious person, id love to know the meaning of it.

next is the description. im not gonna lie when i say that at first, i thought you wrote it figuratively so i was like 'okay'. but as i read the story, i get what ure talking about. but as a description, it should catch the reader's attention. so my suggestion is that since it's short, add a little more info. for me the best blurbs are those short but activates a reader's curiosity to read the whole book. 

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3. Salad ( 5 / 5 )

i had to swipe up for the next chapter at the speed of lightning. not only does it keeps me hanging but it's also full. u've managed to introduce different pov's in a neat and easier way to understand. 

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4. Main Dish ( 10 / 15 )

the difference of the story to other fantasy ones is that it's beautifully mixed. what i mean is that you combined different elements of fantasy elements. like the red and blue bloods, mates (which i think is mostly an element in vampires and werewolves stories), portals, and the likes. but on another side, im not gonna say that it's entirely unique. though it was great but for me, the latter parts were kinda predictable. while reading it also, it kinda felt like things were going a little too fast. but all in all, i like the concept.

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5. Palate Cleanser ( 10 / 15 )

the events are obviously well-planned. despite shifts of pov's in the story, i understand it crystal clear. just like what ive said earlier, u write in a neat way and im down for it. idk why, but writing styles like yours please my eyes.

of course, while writing a novel, having some errors are inevitable. as for the punctuations, id say you know how to utilize them well. im not really aware if it's because they're different from human that it affected their way of talking (please do inform me), but here are some of the grammatical errors ive noticed in the book.

first off, is 'thanks goodness'. according to grammarly (my very reliable source), it says that 'thanks' is an informal way to say 'thank you'. so by saying 'thanks goodness' is like saying 'thank you goodness'. so i guess it should be 'thank goodness'. additional info that its a phrase expressing relief. it might be just a typo here, but i went on abt it so that others will be aware of it too!

in this second photo 'first ever time', i think the words 'ever' and 'time' should switch places.  

in this next photo, it says "Go find someone else to be selled!" if im not mistaken, i believe that it should be 'sold' instead of the word 'selled'.

also another thing is when, the first letter of the first word after the first quotation mark should be capitalized. like : nodded, "You sick people..."

lastly, i think this one is just another typo since 'v' and 'f' are neighbors on the keyboard. but yeah, instead of 'save' it should be 'safe', since save is mostly a verb while safe is an adjective.

just a friendly reminder that everything written in this review is only my suggestions, opinions, and knowledge from school and some books. please do correct me if i mentioned something wrong :))

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6. 2nd Main Dish ( 9 / 10 )

i like the characters. they're given a lot of purpose in the story. for example, yiren is actually a mate of someone (i don't wanna give spoilers lol) who keeps the balance between the decisions of the guardians. aside from jungkook, without that someone, the guardians' decisions about hera would all be just a 'yes' to everything. the main characters have a great background story too. so great job!

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7. Dessert ( 5 / 5 )

the ending was really satisfying, aside from being a happy one, you also finally indicated what the readers were curious for. 

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+ Wine ( 5 / 5 )

truly aesthetic. that's it. the images (to help the readers visualize, eg. the heartball), and fancy symbols are just some of the things that makes the book prettier that it is already.

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TOTAL = 54.5 / 70

thanks for the meal! we hope you enjoyed your order here at fairesto ♡ if ever you have clarifications, questions, or objections about the review always remember that we could always talk about it over a scrumptious meal (aka through dm's).

thank you for ordering, dear jena ! be happy ~

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"if i could turn back time, id love you when you're still human"

Euphoria L'Disparaitre by theJeNation