~ 1ForrestRun

this line is so relatable for me. im that type to stay on friendship lane despite of having feelings towards the other person ಠ~ಠ. so, you definitely got me there.

hi dearest raina, this is vminfairy , your head chef and i hope ü enjoy your order ♡

[ 2020 review credits to hoelysprite aka vminfairy ]

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Course 7 : Blueberry Cheesecake

"Snapshot" by @1ForrestRun

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1. Hors d'oeuvres ( 5 / 5 )

your cover is indeed really idealistic and superb. i have a thing for covers like yours. as a reader, i'll definitely check out your book because of how eye-catching your book cover is.

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2. Soup ( 8 / 10 )

Title : Snapshot

Description :

the title was pretty self-explanatory. it befits the plot really well. the word used for the title is exceptionally good because reading it at first glance, readers will have ideas of what the story is all about. will it be a mature story of a guy sending someone nudes? a couple who met their fate through seeing their photos online? or, it's about a creepy stalker who posts your photos without consent online? im really glad you chose the latter!

plus, im a huge fan of one-word titles. ♡

as for the description, i find it relatively long. now, there are two words i used; relatively and long. first off, everything written on the blurb was obviously related to the story and yes, they're all important as well. unfortunately, i find the entire thing long ( excluding the award wins, which btw, congrats ). this part right down here:

is already a short paragraph that hints the plot and will definitely get readers hooked. usually, what i see in bookstores are books with three or less than paragraphs of description. i know adding snippets at your blurb is a good move but in my opinion, make sure that the description won't look like a chapter already because of it. again, this is just an opinion ♡

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3. Salad ( 5 / 5 )

the effort with the edits in the first chapter got me all creeped out in some way and the event really got me swiping for more!

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4. Main Dish ( 14 / 15 )

the plot is literally a chef's kiss! revelations are slowly surfacing and im down for it. for me, writing a mystery or thriller book is definitely a difficult one. ive tried writing one before but it's obviously not for me. while you, on the other hand, NAILED IT! it's necessary to give your readers the chill and thrill when writing a story like yours, and yes, you did give me the creeps. ive had a few ideas of who the stalker might be but you surprised with the story's twists! i just want more taekook moments in the book since it's a ship story, stalker stories are also somewhat usual too in this platform but all in all, it's amazing!

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5. Palate Cleanser ( 15 / 15 )

i have nothing else to say in this part. the punctuation and grammar in the book are on point. i read stories thoroughly so it's easy for me to spot mistakes but in yours, i see none (that explains why i have no screenshots) ! SPOTLESS and FLAWLESS writing, i live for your style. it was so professionally written, im so in love with it! you write things in detail making the story easier to visualize.

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6. 2nd Main Dish ( 9 / 10 )

some characters seemed versatile, distinct, and have their own goals in the story. for example, in my perspective, jungkook's goal is to find the person behind the vantae account so that he can finally live his life without any worry that someone might be lurking behind his back again. characters' true colors are slowly revealed in the story, at first, you will think that jimin is an angel friend, but his obnoxious traits surface within him as the story continues. although, i feel like some of the characters are still new to me even though they've been introduced already. like yoongi, if my memory serves me right, i think he was introduced in chapter 3 and up until at the latest chapter i don't know much about him aside from jimin and him hitting each other up and from taehyung's explanations. so far, that's it, well done!

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7. Dessert ( 5 / 5 )

triple WOW on this part, i think i need ice because the events are slowly getting hot! id like to see more of taehyung and jungkook moments in your book and of course, to know who is making our ggukie's life a living hell by posting his photos online!

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+ Wine ( 5 / 5 )

the article thingy's on the first part of some chapters are really appreciated. i actually learned a lot because of it! i love that aside from entertaining your readers through your brilliant plot, you also let them learn with your given information! also, the edits you made! i appreciate the way you add your reader's username in the photos you add in each chapter. the banners, sweet author notes, and just everything!

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TOTAL = 66 / 70

what a mouthful of surprises! we hope you enjoyed your order here at fairesto ♡ if ever you have clarifications, questions, or objections about the review always remember that we could always talk about it over a scrumptious meal (aka through dm's).

thank you for ordering, dear raina ! keep smiling and be happy ~

ps. sorry for taking too long! i hope i actually made sense in this review and ive helped you in some way ♡ thank you!

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"when I need you more than ever, you throw me out like trash."

Snapshot by 1ForrestRun