Wow, you did it! You made it through these rewritten chapters. Man I feel really special! Any way, if some unholy part of your says, yeah I want to read more of this, but with really really bad writing, then read ahead! It's for the original chapters, a page full of all the original stuff, and best of all, I give context so that you're not confused as hell! I will also make the grammar and stuff like that waaaaaay better!