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🔥Ryoma/Shuichi/Taka/Slight Mikan Kinnie, Inferiority complex or Depressed?!, I have to get stronger for (Person), Corrects himself and other constantly, would rather not talk unless he sees fit, NEEDS THEREPY, gets PTSD when around water but plays it off by leaving or getting angry at himself and others, end death prob takes like ten mins,
🌑 Fyuhiko/Slight Kokichi/Togami/Celeste Kinnie, Would totally blackmail u, Mafia bro, You "will not" return to the pool, drunk uncle, drinks spiked coffee, kicks his feet up on the desk, shuffles paper too often, sees people as safes and himself as a robber, only person he likes is 🎖 who he identifies as Archer, Loves making fun of 🔥,
❄️Nekomaro/Souda/Slight Bakugo/Ibuki kinnie, Loud and Proud, Hides insecurities, will eventually snap, Def has the hots for 🎆, weakest Pokémon/craziest battle style, That bitch who ends up dead like YEARS before everyone else (most likely for doing something really stupid), incorrectly quoted Shakespeare, Really liked shipping characters in old stories, totally kinned Mercutio Tybalt and Paris (Cried for weeks after they died), shipped MercutioXTybalt MercurioXBenvolio MercutioXAnyOtherMale TybaltXAnyOtherMale to hard,
🎆Kirumi/Chiaki Kinnie, Cleans up after everyone but ❄️, Doesn't like 🌑 but a bitch needs to get "paid" somehow, "I'm not just gonna be in RR, I'm gonna kill everyone AND WIN!",
🎖Slight Nagito/Old Disney Princes/Slight Junko Kinnie, Charming, Caring, Has snapped and then is now like this, Kisses people's hands when they hold them out, Would openly and calmly admit to wanting to die, Would deny everything in a panic like Teruteru in SDA2, Hella gay, Really enjoys being around everyone but mostly 🌑 and 🔥, Quoted Shakespeare a lot,
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This is Home
Arms Tonight
Never Meant to Know
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"So your telling me your fine-" 🎖 making air quotes around the fine, "-but you almost died of sleep deprivation like ten times, over working twice that amount, can't even be around water, when we're on an island! Your not fine, you need a friend or maybe ten."
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The battle was finished.
"W-What! No way!" ❄️ whined like a child, falling to his knees and putting his hands to his face in a slightly too play write way. He continued, "How could a boring and always silent no body like you defeat me!"
A chuckle was heard from the side of the battle field, devious and calculating, followed soon after by clapping. All heads turned to the applause, it's echo ringing with malcontent. 🌑 snickered again and spoke, "It really is not that surprising to see me praise someone, is it." Speaking the last words with a smile, he walked over to ❄️, who was still sulking, but had moved so he was facing a corner. "Aww poor ❄️, don't worry ,you'll improve-" ,as 🌑 spoke the last words, he grabbed one of ❄️'s ponytails and pulled backwards, forcing ❄️'s agonized face into a stare off between the two, "-And you better do it soon, is that clear."
With tears in his eyes, ❄️ nodded, and his hair was let go, leaving him to scamper off to another corner, holding his head in his hands.
🌑 continued, turning to 🔥, "With that said, I want to congratulate 🔥 on winning!" 🌑 closed his eyes and smiled, but the smile was devoid of any emotion, but distain.
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🌑 pat 🔥 on the back, and moved over to leave the room.
"🎖 take him back to his room."
🎖's walk was no where near as steady as he would have liked it to be. His pace was off put by 🔥, who lay comatose in his arms, likely the result of not sleeping for the past week or so. Why hadn't 🔥 taken the time to sleep was a mystery to 🎖, but all that mattered was to get him to sleep.

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