Scrap early version of Christmas chapter for avatar


This was the first draft of the avatar I was having a rough time trying to figure out where to take it but after a day of working on it I gave up and tried to work on the one that we would end up using.
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An avatar user was walking through some small jungle in cold weather. He was able to see his breath on this cold day.

It was early morning as he was looking around for some big leaves. That he could use for some gifts.

The young man found out that they had something just like Christmas except there was some slight difference.

First of all they did it as a day to thank eywa greatest gift the Navi.

For them they celebrate their loved ones and family for their safety. One of those was a gifts for making it back.(that all don't think to hard on it)

After finding enough for everyone he know he walked back to the side of the island that many use the tree roots as a home

Walking through the path ways the one thing he hated was the ocean it made it so much colder during the morning.

Heading inside his home he place down the leaves next to seven items. He grabbed a string that would hold it together perfectly.

He sat down between the items he first started with his closest friend Neteyam. He had been working on this for a while. It was a solid knife with a handle that should feel great in his hand.

Not only that he had carved in neteyam initials into the very bottom on both sides of it. He had notched his knife and was becoming worn out.

He started to wrap it around the knife. He started to work on the next one.

Lo'ak he was hard one to figure out what he would want. But after awhile he decided to

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This is where I had stop at. Anyway I hope you found it kinda interesting

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