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Ranker: Littlepotato2006
Author: its_anki
Title
First off, the grammar in the title is wrong. It should be โI wish weโd never meet again.โ Love the originality of the title! It shows the conflict of emotion so well.
Cover
Secondly the authorโs, aka yours username isnโt clearly visible in the cover so make it larger and maybe keep only your username and not the rest of the words.Other than that the cover is absolutely mesmerising! The combining of the picture and editing is praise worthy.
Blurb
The blurb is pretty simple and straight to the point. Love that. Tho during this specific bit,
"I wish we'd never met again."
"I wish I'd understood her."
Itโs kinda unclear who is speaking? Because so far it was the guy's line then the girlโs and it was pretty clear but in this bit it confuses me as to who is saying which line.
Also the,
โWill she be able to forgive him for his misdeeds or leave her to repent for them forever?โ
The use of the female pronouns twice is quite confusing, will SHE forgive him or leave HER to repent for them forever. I will guess that you meant to but he, so do fix that dutifully.
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