Everything Wrong With Chapter 10: There is no way out, get rekt nerds.
WHAT WHY NO CH. 9 SIN!!?EXPLANATION POINT QUESTION MARK. Calm thine tits, people. Not alot of plot advancement happened in ch.9, so (Exept Kay acting as if she had feelings so she can blend in with the other humans. Oh and I guess Ty's wounds were able to get to the real world or whatever...) And it was a really short chapter, so I'm leaving it unsinned. WELL WHY NOT COMBINE CH. 9 AND CH.10!?!? Because I'm just not doing it. Come at me bro.
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Mitch's P.O.V
-suffering from to arrow wounds in his shoulder and foot, his left foot, which is completely ironic in such a cruel way.
Ty is sort of dying and what can everyone only think of?
Memes. F*cking. Memes.
-They had only been in minrcraft for one day, and already they may have lost one of their friends.
Well it's kind of sort of Adam's fault, I mean...no it's everyone's fault. 1: How do you simply run blindly and only notice where you're going UNTIL you reach a cliff.
2: Was the only way down jumping? If you had enough time for Adam and Jerome to say something, they sure as hell had enough time to find another way down. How fast were those mobs even moving? Were they even moving?
They couldn't think of anything.
No one thought of like, fighting bosses or something? I mean I know it's a far off chance but hell, are you telling me they could not get one idea?
-"but maybe we need to fall to sleep, and when we do, we'll go back."
One sin off for Mitch coming up with a idea. Aww Mitch, you smart cookie.
Everybody seemed to agree, except Jason.
Hey Jason NOBODY LIKES A KNOW IT ALL.
-"Ty's out cold, and he hasn't teleported back to our world yet."
But his soul could have. And you can't see his soul nOW CAN YOU MR. KNOW IT ALL.
Suddenly, everybody jumped as Ty sprang
Sprang.
up from his slumber.
Last time I checked, he wasn't sleep...he kinda blacked out.
-as his eyes darted around the cave
OH NO HIS EYES. THIS IS NIGHTMARE FEUL SOMEONE PLEASE CATCH HIS EYES.
-and he looked as if he were going to collapse again.
Ok, one sin off for Brit knowing what grammar is. YOU DO NOT PUT was going to NO.IT'S were going to. Oh, What's grammar? It's the difference between knowing your sh*t, and knowing you're sh*t. {Best Dictionary Ever. Go look it up.}
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Now I'm going to add a sin for ty looking like he was going to collapse even though he's already sitting down.
"I... I could hear her," he began
"Here who?" Adam questioned.
The "Doesn't answer question because she/he is to confused" Clichè.
"Kay," Ty answered "I could here her, she... she was crying saying she didn't want me to die."
No sh*t, I actually read this as: 'She was crying, saying she wanted me to die.' My hate towards Kay is literally altering the way I see words.
Two sins for kay f*kcing with my brain.
"Dood,
Dood.
-are you sure it wasn't a dream?" Mitch asked, worried for his friend.
Mitch, you were the one suggesting this sleep thing would be possible, now your calling Ty insane? Just...what?
No, I know it was real."
Ever heard of lucid dreaming?
Also since we know this was real, shouldn't there have been a shift in hospital room or something? Like his heart rate could have picked up or...whatever. I'm pretty sure there had to be some type of shift they could feel as Ty hopped between demisions.
Ty hopped between dimensions. Why Ty? Because the first to break a bone is the first to get home I guess.
Also don't call him Ty. It's simply, the doctor.
"Wait, so what you are trying to say is that we're in a coma in real life-
Is this the real life? Is this a parody...
This isn't the real life. It's just a parody. (*coughcough* Mlghwnt *coughcough*)
-but somehow we are still here?" Ian questioned."
Oh.
My.
God.
Realisation: 20%
There bodies are in another place while they're minds are in this place..
Realisation: 40%
They can get wounds that appear on they're body in the real life...
Realisation: 60%
They're fighting to get back....
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Realsiation: 80%
This actually is the mother f*cking Matrix.
Realisation: GG, Brit.
"Well our bodies didn't teleport to Minecraft with us, so it does make some sence."
First of all: How would you know if your bodies didn't go with you? Wouldn't you be in that body so you wouldn't have known? Did you expect to see a clone of yourself as your body and one as your soul?
Second of all: Who the Nether is speaking?
-"feeling stronger, we might be able to communicate with Kay and get some help from the outside world."
Welp. Ty just became the unofficial official Ginny Pig.
Also does the person they ask have to be Kay? Ugh. Alright whatever you say, plot.
"Well, it's worth a shot." said Ty.
The only reason I'm sinning this is because if you go to the book, there is WAY TO MANY "just like you?, You were worth a shot too. XD , and Did Ty make that pun on purpose. -.-"
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I'm not angry. Just displeased.
"Before we can do any of that." Adam began,
Lemme take a selfie.
"Well what are waiting for then?"
Mitch, you guys just came up with the idea, and you haven't even given anyone the chance to even stand up. What, did you have a redbull before you got here or something?
"Let's get digging."
Minecraft Logic #1: You don't dig. I don't even know what that means. You mine.
Minecraft Logic #2: You have no wood, therefore no sticks, therefore no wooden pickaxe, so calm down and go punch some trees.
Minecraft Logic #3: Does not agree with Mitch Logic.
And on top of all of this, I'm still going to add 2 sins for this BEING BASED OFF THE EFFIN MATRIX. no. I'm not over analysing it. What are you talking about.
Sin Count: 36
Sentence: Bohemian Raspody
(-Is this the real life? Is this a MATRIX SEQUEL)
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~{A/N:}~
Ayyyyyy for once I'm not inhumanly (that's a word. totes.) late!!! Also someone asked me to draw my OC. I can't draw if my life depended on it, so whatever you see in that picture, it's my best shot. My ross shot. HEYYYY I BEGAN EVERYTHING WRONG WITH MINECRAFT IN THE MORNING YOU CAN REALLY CHECK THAT OUT THAT WOULD BE GNARBUCKLE.
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That shamless plugin tho.
That is all for now my lovely wattpadians, I'll write you guys later! :3
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~The_Fic_Girl
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