Everything Wrong With Ch.13: Pretty Little TLYiers
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Guys...I'm sorry the quality of the chapters have dropped. BUT I WILL FIX THIS! I now have time to sit down and right good chapters, so please just bare with me. <3
ALSO OMF. 1.03k READS? IS THIS EVEN THE REAL LIFE BRAH?
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Jason's P.O.V
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"I don't know, and I think I dont want to know." Mitch answered with a tremble in his voice.
But if you don't know then you'll never leave, and then this book is going to be 2 chapters longer!
Also cliche "I don't think I want to know" is cliche.
"Do you think whoever belongs to that voice is the one who sent the mobs after us in the cave, too?"
No that was the evil voice's twin brother, Bob.
-apparently really doesn't like us." Ty answered back.
Ty is referring to himself as 'us'. Also they don't 'hate' them, they just 'really don't like'.
...
2PG4Me
"We can worry about that later-
No actually, this is probably your main problem right now. But like a great team once did: I'll just f*cking ignore it.
-our shelter just turned into a big pile of rocks. Jerome pointed out.
That reminds me: How the hell did that happen? Last time I checked, when things explode in minecraft things blow up, not fall down because you know, logic. So actually the cave should have had a Michael Bay explosion and had team crafted walking away with shades on. Hell that would have made more since then a tunnel collapsing.
-may we should fallow
What is fallow? Hey I dont know bro, all I know is flash light eyes is a hoe, Kay is the foe and Jason's a bro-...what just happened. OH YEAH! Fallow isn't a word.
Y'know.
-FOLLOW the river downstream, see where it goes."
Making my way downstream, rowing fast, mobs pass, and I'm here now.
*dun dun dun dun dun.*
"Might as well." Ian agreed.
Or you could get resources and regain the defences you lost in the collaption of the cave. Nope! Just follow a river and hope for the best.
*facedesk*
They had been walking for what seemed forever,
Wow! Even longer then when you fell from the Matrix?
...
No. I am never letting that go.
when Jason looked over at Ty,
#TrueloxTime
just to see he was slightly limping on his left foot and had a pained expression on his face, as if the wound was still hurting him.
Well I mean he got f*cking shot, that's not something you just sleep off. Also has no one else noticed this? Why is no one helping the person that's wounded? I'm sorry if I seem a bit salty, but Ty is love and life, and I will not stand for this abuse damit!
-don't worry about me though, it's not that big of a deal," Ty answered, as he continued to limp.
This was the heroes last words, as he died seconds later from no-one-gave-a-f*ck syndrome.
-Jason questioned, concerned for his friend.
#TwoTrueloxTimes
It's just a little sting, nothing to worry about," Ty said as he smiled at Jason.
News Flash: comma is the new period!
"Well, O.K. then," Jason said as he caught up to the rest of the group.
Jason accepting this answer.
Jason was still not convinced Ty was O.K-
Oh, sin off for Jason still for the #TrueTwoTrueloxTimez.
he saw Ty's smile disappear completely, and the look on his face was replaced with complete pain and worry.
WHAT IS UP WITH FANFIC CHARACTERS AND THEIR FEAR OF HELP? BECAUSE WHEN THEY'RE ABOUT TO DIE, THEY'RE ALL SALTY LIKE "F*ck maybe I should have told someone I was slowly diying..."
Jason didn't want to bother his friend-
Friend has been said twice now. Just wanted to note that.
-knowing Ty didn't want everyone to worry about him.
But that's pretty much the main issue! Ty's health is way more important to them and he knows that. I'm blaming the plot for this one.
Also all plot sins=Two sins.
-and saw what they were staring at.
Oh the suspension is killing me.
In front of them, land could be seen stretching as far as the eye could see, covered in trees of various shades of green and a mountain looming over the terrain.
Oh how convenient! I sure hope there's no massive cock block that's going to take up two chapters! That sure would be unfo-
The only problem was something stood in between them and the land beyond.
Godamit.
And that thing was the ocean.
How can you see a land that stretches 'as far as the eye could see' if there is a large ocean in front of you? That's not possible Jason, you dingus. *sighs*
Sin Count: 25
Sentance: I have a secret, can you keep it?
(-Ty's smile disappeared completely, and the look on his face-)
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....I'm now at 1.04k reads in just another 5 HOURS.
ER MER GERD. (Yes 5 hours it took to write a chapter cause A: It's impossible to sit and focus to write with pretty much unconfirmed ADD B:...Just A.) That's all for now my lovely wattpadians; I'll write you all later!
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Edit: NOW ITS 1.06k. WHAT. JUST. I CAN'T EVEN. HOW. WH-
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