The Edge of Reason
I apologize for having no chapter here... something happened and I lost this entire chapter. I been unable to recover it and I will eventually be attempting to rewrite it. I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience and though I intend on revising this I am currently focusing on the progression of the story.
The gist of this chapter is how Rey comes out of the mind trick fairly quickly as her power tends to counter kylo's. She leads him to the cliffs edge and down a path towards a hidden grotto where Kylo assumes the Falcon is being kept however, he begins to realize there is something else going on, especially when he begins to pick up on the fact that Rey's mind is no longer being influenced by his mind trick.
A Force storm is already simmering around them , causing the narrow path of steep rock carved steps to slicken and in Rey's haste to get Kylo down the path she slips, Kylo catches her and pushes her against the wall, protectively pinning her between himself and the ledge. Kylo and Rey have an intimate, however confusing moment where there is a slight power struggle and in kylo's anger over discovering Rey is indeed leading him into a trap (she calls out to Luke for help, ultimately revealing to Kylo that he'd been played but since he has no knowledge of how Rey was attached to his violent dream the night before, he doesn't understand her betrayal) he regretfully threatens her in a manner that suggests he would take her against the wall he had her currently pressed against. ( it's an insinuation and sounds way worse paraphrased then it actually is) essentially he presses himself against her back side suggestively. She spitefully says, "you wouldn't dare."
He returns her anger with, "Do you really presume to know me so well?" Or something very close to those lines.
This very Effectively scares the wits out of her and Kylo angrily pushes away from her, already angry and regretful of what he'd said out of spite and hurt. Then Rey puts space between them and calls for Luke which only enrages Kylo further, especially when she refers to him as her Master and not Kylo.
Further down the cliffside, Luke steps out of the grotto behind Rey. Kylo moves closer to Rey who in turn backs away from him. And then we are pretty much at the next chapter.
I'm not going to sugar coat it guys... I'm really down about this. I mean really really upset, but I guess I'll just have to rewrite it. I had a really good break down over this. I've spent over a year developing and writing this story and to loose a piece of it has been a really heartbreaking and eventually numbing experience. Now I know that sounds ridiculous but it just has been.
I really hope my readers understand why I'm not rushing to fill this chapter in even though it only just happened. Please be able to look past this bump and give the rest of the story a try, I really don't think you will be disappointed.
Thank you for your time and patience and as always happy reading.
-DarkGuardian-
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