How about a Do Not Cringe Challenge!!!!

Oh good lord

Here we go

Remember, I didn't just write this, I wrote it a year ago, and I copy and pasted it

Fine here

 "... aaaaaaand thats all don't forget to slap that like button and i will see you later recruits!" I said. "You stopped?" Jin asked with a wide grin.

Everyone started laughing. " how long did we go," asked Ross.

" 14 mins, normal amount," said Jess.

"oh."

"we gon do pirate vid?" asked Barney.

" later 2day." said Jess.

I sighed heavily. Ships... Crafting dead has caused skymau now. I don't want to kiss Jess. No offence to her tho. She's... a ... best friend. But... there's... someone else ...... here. ".............KAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Jin screamed.

"JESUS!!!" I hissed.

"OMG!" Jess said.

"heheheheheheheheh!" Jin laughed hysterically.

"HaHa VERY funny," Ross snickered.

' Jin has a cute laugh and grin' I thought with a smile.

"you k Adam? you not act right," asked Barney.

"Huh? N-no I... I'm... fine...I'm j-just... can I talk to you, Jess? ... Alone? " I stammered.

"umm... sure!" Jess said.

" We'll stay here... lovebirds!" Ross said.

Both me and Jess blushed and laughed. I guided Jess into the first-game-office she had made and shut the doors.

" 'Sup," Jess asked.

I looked at her shyly. it's now or never, i guess.

"I... wanted to tell you how I why I've been acting weirdly..." I said. My face felt like it was on fire. Jess nodded, her eyes soft.

" I realised that... I've fallen in love with Jin, and i was wondering how to tell him."

" Thanks for telling me... that's ironic... i was going to tell you that I've fallen in love with Ross!" she said, understanding in her voice.

"wow that IS ironic that we..." I trailed off, staring at the plush foxy she had made.

"you don't have to say anything." Jess said.

"ok... thanks... let's go back. we'll talk later." i said.

"K... you seem to like foxy... want him? i have more than one." Jess asked.

"...sure!" i said happily.

She handed me the tiny plush foxy animatronic.

"yaar!" Foxy said squeakily.

I smiled, cradling... Baby-foxy in my arms.

For some reason, Baby-foxy gave me courage.

"you should tell Jin!" squeaked Baby-foxy.

"you think so?" i asked.

"yes!"

"ok, but stay with me please,"

"don't worry, i will!" Baby-foxy squeaked encouragingly.

"ok, thanks...Baby-foxy." I said confidently.

Jess overheard and told Ross and Barney that she had to show them something so i could talk to Jin. I feel a warm, rough... something. I look down at my hands. Baby-foxy's licking me! I scratch behind his ear and he purrs loudly. Baby-foxy's big yellow eyes looked up at me with confidence. I nodded and looked around for Jin. He's trying to do the balloon parkour Jess made."Jin, can i talk to you?" i asked. now or never!

Jin jumped down. "sure!" He said.

"You know... we've known each other... a while now..."

"Yeah!"

"I...*sigh*...I-i think..."

"I'm listening..."

Baby-foxy started licking me again. i smiled. "I've fallen in love with you, Jin." I said.

"I've fallen in love with YOU, adam!" Jin said happily.

We got close enough to hug and kiss; and that's exactly what we did.

clapclapclapclap! "Adam," Jess said," me and ross got together too!"

"Yeah," Ross said shyly.

"ompar..." Barney said.

I barely heard them. I was too busy savoring the long kiss me and Jin were having. finally we released each other. "yay!!!" Baby-foxy squeaked excitedly. I smiled happily.

"aww, cuute," Jin said, "I found a tiny-foxy too! it's a girl!" he said. he put tiny-foxy on the floor. It's bigger than Baby-foxy, and more adventurous. "Yaar!!" she said.

I set Baby-foxy on the floor next to tiny-foxy. They played for a few minutes, then feel asleep.

The only good thing I can say about this monstrosity is it's got 563  words

But............... WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK MY PAST SELF? THAT SUCKS! YOU USED ABBREVIATIONS, COMMAS WHEN THEY WERE UNNECESSARY, YOU DIDN'T CAPITALIZE, YOU USED WAY TOO MANY DOT DOT DOTS, AND IT LOOKS STUPID IN GENERAL

I know I'm not a good writer now, but at least I'm better than 11 year old me

Did any of you cringe?