Reviewer: the_lonely_pi
Book: Sperm on demand
Author: ihskasii_u
Order by: cupiixcism_u

Cover: 4/5
The cover of "Sperm on Demand" is intriguing and relevant to the story. However, it could be more visually striking to attract a wider audience. The beautiful picture of Kim Taeyoung is attractive, also the mood & tones used are good.

Title: 4/5
The title is bold and provocative, instantly capturing attention. It hints at the unconventional plot and the hidden secrets of the characters. However, it might not appeal to all readers due to its somewhat controversial nature.

Blurb: 4/5
The blurb effectively sets up the premise of the story, introducing the main characters and hinting at the secrets they hold. It creates a sense of intrigue and curiosity, making readers want to dive into the story to uncover these secrets.

Characters: 8/10
The characters are well-developed and interesting. Taehyung, a wildlife photographer with a secret past as a sperm donor, and Erin Müller, a chemistry professor and secret novelist, have unique and compelling backstories. Their interactions are engaging, and their chemistry is palpable. However, more depth and exploration of secondary characters could enhance the story further.

Plot: 7/10
The plot is fresh and original, with an intriguing mix of romance, secrets, and professional life. The story progresses smoothly, with well-paced revelations and character development. The first meeting between Taehyung and Erin is charming and sets the stage for their evolving relationship. However, some plot points feel a bit contrived, and there could be more twists and turns to keep readers on their toes.

Grammar & Vocabulary: 3/5
The grammar and vocabulary are generally good, but there are occasional errors and awkward phrasings that disrupt the flow of the narrative. More careful editing and proofreading could polish the text and enhance readability.

Enjoyment: 4/5
The story is enjoyable and engaging, with a good balance of romance, mystery, and personal growth. The dialogue is natural, and the settings are vividly described, creating an immersive reading experience. The chemistry between the main characters is a highlight, making readers root for their relationship.

Overall Review:
"Sperm on Demand" is a captivating fan fiction that combines romance and mystery in an engaging narrative. Set in the picturesque city of Busan, the story follows the lives of Taehyung, a wildlife photographer and former sperm donor, and Erin Müller, a chemistry professor and secret novelist. Their chance encounter at a library sparks an unexpected connection, leading to a series of interactions that gradually reveal their hidden pasts and desires.

The characters are well-crafted and relatable, with distinct personalities and backstories that add depth to the narrative. Taehyung's shy yet determined nature contrasts beautifully with Erin's confident and inquisitive demeanor. Their evolving relationship is portrayed with warmth and authenticity, making it a joy to follow their journey.

The plot is intriguing, with a good mix of romance and secrets. While some plot points feel slightly predictable, the overall narrative keeps readers engaged and invested in the characters' fates. The settings, from the serene library to the lively coffee shop and the idyllic park, are vividly described, enhancing the story's atmosphere.

Despite some minor grammatical errors and occasional awkward phrasing, the writing is generally good, with natural dialogue and effective pacing. The story could benefit from further editing to smooth out these issues and improve readability.

In conclusion, "Sperm on Demand" is an enjoyable and well-written fan fiction that offers a unique blend of romance and mystery. Fans of Kim Taehyung and readers who enjoy character-driven stories with a touch of intrigue will find this a delightful read.