Book: Journey of the 10 Gemstones
Reviewer: Starr_Diana
Author: Aspiring_Saphire

Title: 5/5

The title fits the story, combining mystery with adventure.

Cover: 3/5

The colors fit together, making the reader think about Gemstones, but it's a bit loaded, without space. The edges are taking the attention from the title.

Blub: 4/5

The blub makes the reader eager to read the book, it has mystery but enough information

Characters: 2/5

The characters need more detail and attention. They are friends but don't talk with each other much, and in one chapter, they are friends; in the next, they are fighting with each other to death, and then they are friends again.

That needs to happen gradually to build the tension between the characters to show the development of good or bad.

At the beginning of the book, the characters witness something traumatic, but in the next chapters, they don't have any type of problem from that experience, like it didn't happen, not having any kind of development.

Having more dialogue could help with the interaction between characters, the way they are behaving, and how they react to certain things.

Plot: 3/5

The plot moves too fast, not letting the reader get used to things before adding more action, too much information can make the reader confused.

Some things at the beginning of the book don't match with others. For example, in the first part of the book, the main characters had to fight with a Commander, but he was stronger than them, and he was about to defeat them. Some chapter later, they could beat their knight idol; who is the best of the best?

They didn't have time to develop their fighting or anything. Showing the way they develop is also a part of the plot, the way to learn things they didn't know or to gain information about certain things.

Grammar & Vocabulary: /5

You have a good vocabulary making the story flow easy. You have some grammar mistakes, and in some sentences, you have words starting with a capital letter in the middle of it; most of them are after a comma; if you feel like that word should be with a capital letter, put a period before it.

Enjoyment: 3/5

The story is good and captivating with some development, it has a lot of potential to be a great book.