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Title: Behold! My difficult roommate
AuthorHarmoniculus
ReviewerTricky_minds

Title: 10/10

I love the uniqueness of the title. It is catchy while also being vague enough to add that element of surprise.

Cover: 10/10

Perfect. I am in love. And I love how it also depicts the personality of the two main characters so perfectly.

Blurb: 10/10

This blurb has all the elements a good blurb should. It has the hook line, which encapsulates the mysterious vibe of the book perfectly while also giving an overview of how the story will pan out.

Grammar: 10/10

Story flow: 10/10

It was so smooth and so freaking perfect. Everything happened at its perfect time and I loved how we could almost see (by the time I got to chap 5) how everything would work out for Kai in the future.

The maze scene was so out of the blue and it made me so curious as to what will happen next.

Characters: 10/10

I loved the characters!! I loved how you portrayed the pressure put on Kai by his family and the effect it has on him. You made me hate Al in just two chapters (idk if that was your intention or not) and I love Jamie. Kai and Jamie contradicted each other in such a beautiful way. I could feel the chemistry from the first second.

Setting \ World building; 10/10

I read up to chapter 5 and I loved your world. The way you managed to encapsulate me in that world and how you made me feel for your characters. You're a great writer.

Originality: 10/10

Personally, I feel like there can never be two same books when it comes to mystery/thriller. There's always a new twist, a new way to present an old twist and it always leaves me in awe. (if you can't tell, this is my favorite genre). You did a great job of starting from high school and then throwing the readers into a whirlwind.

Enjoyability: 10/10

If you can't tell from the review, I absolutely adored your book.

P.S: Look out for a shout out because the story is worth it.

Total: 90/90

Have a good day!

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