I HAVE MANY PROBLEMS WITH THE ORIGINAL.

*ahem*

Why is the hand backwards? Why aren't the lines clean? Why is the dress like that? Why is the hair a neon blue when it's supposed to be natural? Why is there weird white spots on her skin? why is the colour bleeding out? Why are there barely any shadows? Why is-

Okay, I will just stop myself and spare you my long rambling about how the original is not very good-

BUT DID I IMPROVE?

That's the question.

That's all cyu guys bye~!