Waking up

(This is my own sequel of "don't forget" by @tsunderbean I originally asked her to make this happen but she said the was trying to stay away from this for and said I could make it so here we go).

General pov

"Uhh what happened." The voice said as they looked and saw red trees as my memories flooded back. "SUSIE WHERE ARE YOU." They shouted as they looked around panicking and saw two graves and as soon as they read the names on them, their heart? stopped.

            Susie                                                                                                                                     200x-201x                                                                                                                        A Hero and a Legend             

              Kris                                                                                                                                      200x-201x                                                                                                                        A Hero and a Legend

"W-what? w-whats going on? why is my n-name on that grave? and w-why can't I move?" They stuttered and looked down and their world has shattered.

What they saw was not their body but a blue stem going into the ground where they were. "N-no this c-can't be happening I can't be a f-flower." They said as they broke down in tears.

"M-mom, Dad, Asriel, S-susie, anyone please help me." They cried and prayed for someone to show up.





But nobody came.




They looked back up completely dry of tears and stared at the two graves still in disbelief of what they're seeing. 

They were now thinking back to all the good times they spent with Susie trying to distract them for a little bit,they thought about when they went on their journey, their first kiss, when she moved in with them, their first date, when she took them to her secret place, and when they watched the sunrise... but at that moment they realized...




they couldn't feel anything.

"Why can't I feel anything positive?" they asked their-self with their face falling.

(Later)

The flower sat there for a long time trying to feel something towards Susie but they still couldn't feel anything.

The flower was now struggling to move, then he was burrowing underground and resurface in the empty town. "Ugh finally I figured out how to move around now what?" they asked as they heard someone singing in a familiar voice. 

"Ralsei?"

Ralsei pov

It was another beautiful day but I was still feeling guilty because of what I did and for that king Lance decided to banish me here after the incident where I killed Susie and nearly killed him and Kris died of his wounds, only to be let out with his permission. 

After I left the house I went for a walk I decided to sing to my self to keep me happy "When the light is running low and the shadows start to grow and the places that you know seem like fantasy. There's a light inside your soul that's still slowly shining in the cold and the tru-" my singing was interrupted by someone calling my name. "Ralsei over here please it's me Kris."

As soon as I heard that I quickly turned around to see nothing there. "Must be hearing things" I said to my self. "Down here!" I heard the voice again and looked down to see a flower starring at me with tears starting to form. "Hey little flower don't be sad I'll be your friend."

"Ralsei it's me Kris." I looked at them in disbelief thinking it was a sick joke. 

"Come on please don't lie to me Kris is gone, I ki-" I said blankly but was interrupted.

"No it's really me I can prove it, when we were in up the elevator from the dungeon in Card Castle you said that you'll make us a cake after our adventure was over and Susie had to stop making fun of you." They told me as my eyes widened and filled with tears.

"K-kris is it really you?" I said about to break down.

"Yes Ralsei it is me your best friend." 

I went down and hugged him as gently as I could. "Kris I-I though that I would never see y-you again". I just kept crying for a long time before sitting back up wiping my tears away.

"Kris what happened?, why are you like that?" I asked them still confused to why they were a flower.

"I don't know all I remember is Susie dying in front of my eyes and after she took her last breath my vision faded to white and I woke up like this." I froze when he said that, is it my fault that he is a flower? Is he like this because of me?

I decided not to think of it at the moment and tried to comfort them. "Hey uh Kris how about I make that cake I promised to make?"

Kris looked at me with an expressionless look like they did when they were human. "That sounds nice." they answered. "Okay i'll be right back" I said cheerfully. 

After I went back inside I got out two slices of cake I made last night from the fridge, and went back out to Kris who is still there waiting me. "Here you go Kris." I said placing down the plate in front of them. "Thanks." They said emotionless which worried me.

After a few bites of cake I noticed that Kris was still emotionless even after eating my cake so I asked him a question. "Hey Kris what's wrong you haven't been emoting at all." They looked up at me at and said "I don't know for some reason I can't feel anything positive I don't know what's wrong with me." they said blankly.

As soon he said that I ran out of breath as I feared what I thought the cause was. "Kris hang on let me check something." They nodded and I cast a spell that was suppose to show their soul, but nothing showed.

"What's wrong". Kris said.

"Kris your soul, you don't have one." I said fearfully.

Kris pov:

"W-what?" I said not expecting that answer.

 "You don't have have a soul Kris, your soulless that's why you can't feel anything positive". Ralsei explained feeling sorry.

"I-I need to go". I said bitterly.

"K-kris wait." They said halting me.

"I NEED TO GO!" I yelled and then burrowed back down underground. 

"KRIS WAI-" His voice was cutoff when I went underground.

I reappeared at the forgery where the weapons were made for the Guards of Card castle. I went in side and found a bucket of molten metal and went up to it. If I couldn't feel love, I couldn't have anything to live for... I jumped into the bucket.

GAME OVER

















Everything was black when I opened my eyes. I was floating in a empty black void. I looked around and saw a glowing yellow sign that said RESET, I went over to it and touched it. 

I was back in front of Susie and I's graves.

"What? what happened? I died I should be with Susie." I wondered why I was back here, but I went back to the forgery to kill my self again only to reappear back here, the cycle happened a few time, until I gave up. I felt tear forming in my eyes again.

"W-why? Why can't I be with you? why did this have to happen? what caused this?" I suddenly remembered what happened the moment Susie died. 

I saw myself standing on the roof of Card Castle with Lancer injured with an angry Ralsei pointing a gun towards Susie and him pulling the trigger, I ran to see if I could jump in front of it. But I was too late and Susie died in my arms as a white light filled the room.

I snapped back to reality and anger flooded my system and I snapped.

"It was Ralsei, he did this to me, he killed Susie, HE RUINED NO, TOOK MY WHOLE LIFE FROM ME, HE WILL PAY FOR THIS! HE WILL DIE!" It was then I felt new, I saw what the true meaning of this world, the way things worked down here, the one rule"I̴͎͓̔͌ẗ̵͈́̽s̸̠̠̿ ̸̪̇K̷͓͛̽ȉ̶̡́l̸̜͐͋l̷̳̈̈́ ̸̮̞̓̃ơ̵̟̜ṙ̷͎̭̿ ̸̢̻̃͑ḅ̷̚͜͠ę̵͒̆ ̴̞͋͊K̶͖̊ͅi̵̖̥̇͂l̷̟̜̒͝l̴͔̬͑̇ẽ̵͜d̸̢̢͑".

So I went to Ralsei's place and waited for him to come out and when he did I killed him, but why stop there, I went back and killed him over and over and over again in many different ways. Soon I killed everyone else in the dark world over and over, and soon this world became my play ground.

I needed a new name, Kris Dreemurr was gone, now it's only me but what to call myself?

"Hey little flower what's your name." I turned to see a Ruddin looking down at me, so naturally I drove my vines through his heart and said in a new voice that matched my new found name.


"It's me Echo, Echo the Flower."


(Okay first chapter is done what did you think of it, is there anything your concerned about, please let me know in the comments. Chapter 2 will be up in a few days.)

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