CLOSURE.

I hope you enjoy my explanation on the story! i cleaned up my notes and brushed up on everything. i hope it makes sense

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Last chapter ended with Jeff and you getting the potion for the Blood Race. The potion would make you look like a distorted monster so you fit in with the other monsters that are presented in the blood race. Y/N knew the dangers of cheating during the race.

(quick explanation of the blood race: i'm pretty sure when i made it it was going to be a race to the end of a long forest where you get chased by numerous monsters. you have to dodge all kinds of arrows and spikes etc..)

The next day, when the Blood Race is held, Y/N takes the potion. You didn't know, however, that if you get hit by silver the effects wear off. During the race y/n gets hit by silver to add intensity and Slender realizes that Jeff had cheated.

This results in punishment for Jeff. That night, while you lay in the corner he comes in with a bloody back and tired eyes. He wouldn't say a word due to the torment he experienced. He even tears up. You end up laying down in bed with him to comfort him.

this chapter was mainly a filler to get the main character and jeff closer together.
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The plot point with Charles is next after a couple other filler chapters where you guys get closer. Like for example he was going to take you to a sparkly cave that was his "special" place and allow you to swim in the moon pool with him.

Then, I was going to add a chapter in Charles POV where he is taken up by the enemy pack and given the option to revive his old partner if he kidnaps you successfully.

After that he obviously betrays you. Jeff rested in a tree nearby. Charles advances on you and blah blah blah and you and jeff fight him off.

This is when he actually fucking gives in to his desires for you. He admits that he can't handle himself around you. He presses you against a tree and kisses you etc.. and i was going to give my readers options for a "lemon"

Oops, no option it happens but i was going to make sure that you could skip that chapter without having to miss the plot. the next chapter, you wake up outside butt ass naked.

Patrols are going out and this scene you and jeff freak the fuck out and get your clothes on. You guys have to sneak around them.

You get to the mansion and Jeff and you speak about your emotions. He reveals a lot to you and you to him. You guys talk about a relationship, even.

During this, an attack happens from the enemy pack. They were pissed that charles was unsuccessful. They killed Charles to punish him.

During the chaos, Jeff makes a split decision for you to join them and act like you gave in. You share a moment together (aww how sweet) and then i was gonna somehow pull off making the pastas lose and you joining the packs side.

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You reach the packs territory. I was gonna try and make it like there was a huge castle-mansion thingy and when you entered this guy was about to get killed. But since you were new, it was your job to kill him as punishment. You refuse to do it and get severely punished. The wolf's name was Luka. Luka gets put as a servant type wolf but you two begin to be very close friends. He then reveals himself as gay.

I was going to add a few fillers where you fight a few of the wolves and you have to train, and you meet the alpha that burns a brand into your fur as a symbol of the pack. I didn't really think through the wolf segment because i was focused on getting through the blood race at the time, but the fillers were going to be consisting of her having to get as much info as possible and even starting a relationship with the alpha by fighting the alpha female. This causes a few arguments between you and jeff.

You and Jeff would meet up every night to exchange information, until Jeff reveals he needs to enter the castle to find something that was stolen the night of the attack. This chapter would get intense as fuck.

The chapter would end in Jeff taking you out on a little date in the woods:)

The wolf segment was going to have a lot of twists that i didn't really get to unfortunately, but i hope some of the things i said gave you an idea as to what it was going to be.

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After a lot of planning and you having to map out the area/get the defense plans from the alpha and you having to keep up your job as being the alpha female and also dealing with daily missions etc, you get ready to attack with the pastas.

Of course, this being my book YN wanted to explode the entire thing and kill the alpha. The battle would start off as you trying to get explosives in place during the day and also trying to sneak off to update jeff. Finally, after built up anticipation they attack.

You have to witness Luka getting killed. The burn on his shoulder signifying his loyalty to the pack simmered and then began to turn into a wisp of some sort. You approach it and touch it, and you relive through his memories. You absorb his pain and everything. You end up baring his wolf soul as well, which adds to your strength and keeps Lukas memory living on.

The fight continues until you begin losing. You inform jeff of the explosives and you end up having to push through chaos with him to get into the castle and light the gunpowder.

You guys get away easily, and scream at the pastas to get away. You get dragged backward off of a cliff by the alpha and you find yourself facing him off on the ledge. The bombs nearby were ticking. In only seconds, the ground beneath you would collapse. You desperately fight and try to get away.

Of course you end up winning this is my book:) You were on the brink of blacking out. Jeff holds you close and says, "I'm getting tired of blowing things up, aren't you?"

The pastas celebrate victory.

This is what i wrote for the exact ending:

Through it all, i guess you can say things ended well. We returned to the mansion, and i can safely say that i don't have to sleep in the corner anymore if ya know what i mean.

Jeff and I went through a lot of ups and downs, twists and turns, and definitely a lot of explosions. But somehow, we always survived. I mean, after all, our fate is bound by chains.

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I hope this all made sense. If you have ANY questions whatsoever on anything you may want to know, or just any clarifications, let me know. I'm sorry i couldn't finish this book, but i sure as hell tried my best.

I know it doesn't sound like much, but it would have had a lot more than what i could explain. This was mainly just the outline and explaining the fillers etc.

Thank you to everyone who stood with me. I love you all.

Thorn, Out

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