"Hey! Hey! Hurry up! The movie is starting!" You're friend calls to you from the car as you approach, arms full of food and drinks. Sending a quick glance to the screen, you notice the animated numbers on it slowly counting down.  Shit!  You cuss to yourself, your legs almost automatically set into a sprint as your arms struggle to keep the food and drinks from spilling. 

Your friend quickly opens the door for you, and you make it inside of the car just in time to see the screen go black and the ticking of the projector go off. 

Here we go!

Film: Still with you

Film writer: bangtanrewinds

Cover: 10/10

I don't know how you did it, but that shattered glass effect is absolutely stunning.  One thing I loved the most was that pieces of Yoongi's life were being portrayed on the glass shards and then Yoongi is seen behind them - perhaps even looking into them as if he's reflecting on his past.

Title: 10/10

As someone who has read the book from start to recently updated chapter, I really believe the title suits the story.

Blurb: 8/10

Ok, to start off, I think the blurb suits the story perfectly. You laid out a very good summary without giving away the plot. You also added in dialogue from the characters, which I love because I think gives insight to the characters before you read about them. And lastly, you also had questions at the end of the blurb to rouse suspense and intrigue the reader.

The only issue I had with the blurb was the sentence structure and a few minor grammatical mistakes.

For example, just as a suggestion, I would have reworded your first paragraph like this:

"Why do you call me angel?" asked the eleven year old Y/N to her friend Yoongi as he protectively embraced her.

"Because angels are symbols of purity and brightness, just like you are to me. You light up my dark life." Yoongi answered. Y/N nodded despite not understanding his words completely.

I don't want to mark you too low for this however, since I assume you wrote the blurb at the start of the book and since then your writing has significantly improved.

Plot: 10/10

Honestly, I really liked the plot of the story. Instead of having a heart racing, high paced plot, you chose a more realistic setting. It's the story of two broken people learning to rely on each other amidst all the chaos in their lives.

Characters: 10/10

I really liked that you set the first few chapters in Yoongi and Y/N's childhood so you could really get a backstory for the two of them – and Jungkook, that is. I'm so glad that Y/N is trying to establish a healthy relationship with Yoongi and trying to be there for him. I find Yoongi's character relatable for anyone who has had childhood trauma, as despite what people say, the trauma follows you into your adulthood and can cause serious issues and disorders. I hope he is able to open up to Y/N soon. Also, Mrs Min is literally the most conniving, two faced villain! The way you describe her in her dialogue and demeanour makes me want to squish her like an ant.

Grammar/Spelling: 7/10

There were several mistakes in grammar and placement of words – especially in the first few chapters - but they didn't affect my reading.

Flow: 9/10

In your author's notes, I could see a lot of doubts regarding the flow of the plot. I really didn't see this as an issue. In fact, I really think it adds depth to the plot. By slowly building up to the plot, you were able to expand on the characters. You were able to convey their backstories – which explains a lot about their current behaviour, and you were able to build a climax for events in the plot instead of just throwing them at the readers.

Writing style: 9/10

Firstly, I would just like to tell you that I absolutely adore the poems and little verses you put before your chapters. I think they really add character (would that be considered a pun?) to your writing style.

Your writing style is quite neat and easy to read. It's not too over-descriptive and it's not too vague. You have conveyed the emotions of the characters well and brought them to life in their flashbacks, interactions and dialogue.

Originality: 9/10

Honestly, this is probably the only book I've read on Wattpad that has a realistic view on childhood trauma and its effect on the children in their adult years. It also deals with sensitive subjects that are very real in this day and age. As I said before, I admire Y/N's desire to build a healthy relationship with Yoongi and accept him for who he really is – flaws and all. In a lot of fanfiction, unhealthy relationships are actually kind of romanticised, and it just annoys me a lot. I love to see a ff where there is a firm and nourishing bond between the characters.

Personal enjoyment: 10/10

I enjoyed reading this very much. I can't say I'm one for Romance/Drama stories, but I found this one refreshing. I see a lot of potential in it and I hope you will continue to write it :)

Total: 92/100 

Let me know what you think! >

Too immersed in the movie, you didn't notice the projector had turned off until the screen in front of you had turned off. 

Your friend turned to you, a massive smile on her face. "Did you see that?" She exclaimed, giddily. Your other friend piped up as well. "It was awesome! I loved it so much!" 

You nodded frivolously. "Me too! I can't wait to see the next one!" You agreed. 

There was a cute squeal through the car as the projector ticked again. The numbers 3,2, and 1 slowly appeared on the screen. You tensed up in excitement, waiting for the next film to play.

Coming here was such a great idea!