Book: Unlock Your Highest Potential
Author: prettykiii_
Genre: Nonfiction

Note: Since this isn't the typical kind of book I review, this won't be a typical review. I will try my best to help with the actual writing aspects and the ones requested in your comment, just keep in mind there won't be much in-depth analysis of the themes and such.

Cover: 80/100

A pretty basic cover, but not entirely unfitting. It fits well with your title and the theme of the book, but isn't quite the attention grabber that attracts hundreds of readers when scrolling by. I'd definitely do something to liven it up a little.

Blurb: 80/100

My feelings are pretty much the same for the blurb. It's basic and serves its purpose, but there are also some phrasing that could be changed to make it less metaphorical and more understandable. Here's the edits I made:

Sentence 2: "It functions mainly as your awakening to the past needed to reach the peak of greatness in your future. 

Sentence 3 "You are the key, and these strategies, tips, and methodologies will allow you to discover the best version of yourself."

Grammar: 99/100

Very few grammar errors!

Just keep in mind some of the phrasing tips to come, and remember to proofread for missing commas and such.

One such example (Paragraph 1):

"Friend this is serious I am begging you to…"

Edited: "Friend(s), this is serious. I'm begging you too.

Clarity: 75/100

To be honest, It took me so long to do this review because the writing was giving me a headache 😂. Almost the entirety of your book is metaphorical, and not all of it is worded in a way that can be understood, neither easily or at all. I would take some time to analyze your writing sentence by sentence, trying to simplify it as much as possible to give your readers it's true meaning. It's very, very well written, just confusing as heck, which may be unavoidable in this kind of writing. Just remember to make it understandable, and not just to the writer. Also, your paragraphs are GIANT. I would definitely break it apart way more, which will also help your flow and clarity.

If you'd like, you could send me a paragraph or two (in a format that I can copy and paste to edit) to my PM, and I can edit them to give you an idea of what I'm talking about. I wouldve done it on here but I can't copy and paste it off wattpad so I can make edits, and it would take ages to rewrite. Just LMK if you do, as well as if you have any questions!

Consistency: 90/100

Your writing is indeed very metaphorical, and remains that way for much of the book. Again, I'd try to make EVERYTHING a lot simpler, and it would definitely help, and give a more consistent description of life and the advice you need to get through it.

Overall thoughts: 90/100

This is a very well written book, and I commend you on your captivating and illustrative (though sometimes too much) writing style. These kind of books (well written ones anyway) are a rare find on Wattpad, and there isn't really a huge audience for them, so I know it's hard to get feedback. I had very little to say about your writing, and I apologize because nonfiction is anything but my specialty. I tried my best to address what you asked for, and hopefully it'll help a little with editing and such.

I'd definitely seek another review from someone more familiar with religious type writing, but thank you for choosing me as your reviewer!

—Cyprus